请帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,帮我改改好吗?The biggest wonderful place in movies is movie creates a kind of living language environment,this language environment all includes-languages,cultures,thoughts,practice in this environment

请帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,帮我改改好吗?The biggest wonderful place in movies is movie creates a kind of living language environment,this language environment all includes-languages,cultures,thoughts,practice in this environment
请帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,帮我改改好吗?
The biggest wonderful place in movies is movie creates a kind of living language environment,this language environment all includes-languages,cultures,thoughts,practice in this environment,and the listening and the oral speech would get exaltation continuously.We can use the 4 parts of speech、culture、vocabulary and audio-visual to practice the listening from the movie.
If want to make exertion of the teaching advantage in English audio-visual teaching,it have to adopt diverse teaching methods.In the audio-visual lessons,for the sake of transfer the students' study aggressive and learn knowledge desires,and exalt the teaching efficiency,here summarized some kind of valuable methods.

请帮我看看有没有什么语法错误,帮我改改好吗?The biggest wonderful place in movies is movie creates a kind of living language environment,this language environment all includes-languages,cultures,thoughts,practice in this environment
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If want to make exertion of the teaching advantage in English audio-visual teaching,(it换成we) have to adopt diverse teaching methods.In the audio-visual lessons,for the sake of transfer(加ing) the students' study aggressive and learn(加ing) knowledge desires,and exalt(加ing) the teaching efficiency,(here summarized some kind of valuable methods换成some kinds of valuable methods are summarized here).