看一下这篇文章有什么毛病,如果满分10分的话,这篇文章能打几分【英语】Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi.Taiyuan is a big and beautiful city.There are more than 4.2millon people lived there.It`s south-east of Beijing.The tour
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![看一下这篇文章有什么毛病,如果满分10分的话,这篇文章能打几分【英语】Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi.Taiyuan is a big and beautiful city.There are more than 4.2millon people lived there.It`s south-east of Beijing.The tour](/uploads/image/z/12922783-7-3.jpg?t=%E7%9C%8B%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E6%96%87%E7%AB%A0%E6%9C%89%E4%BB%80%E4%B9%88%E6%AF%9B%E7%97%85%2C%E5%A6%82%E6%9E%9C%E6%BB%A1%E5%88%8610%E5%88%86%E7%9A%84%E8%AF%9D%2C%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E6%96%87%E7%AB%A0%E8%83%BD%E6%89%93%E5%87%A0%E5%88%86%E3%80%90%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E3%80%91Taiyuan+is+the+capital+of+Shanxi.Taiyuan+is+a+big+and+beautiful+city.There+are+more+than+4.2millon+people+lived+there.It%60s+south-east+of+Beijing.The+tour)
看一下这篇文章有什么毛病,如果满分10分的话,这篇文章能打几分【英语】Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi.Taiyuan is a big and beautiful city.There are more than 4.2millon people lived there.It`s south-east of Beijing.The tour
看一下这篇文章有什么毛病,如果满分10分的话,这篇文章能打几分【英语】
Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi.Taiyuan is a big and beautiful city.There are more than 4.2millon people lived there.It`s south-east of Beijing.The tourists enjoys eating noodles and dumpling.The Jinci Park,double-tower temple are beautiful famous places.Taiyuan is a beautiful city.Hope you have a good time in there.
看一下这篇文章有什么毛病,如果满分10分的话,这篇文章能打几分【英语】Taiyuan is the capital of Shanxi.Taiyuan is a big and beautiful city.There are more than 4.2millon people lived there.It`s south-east of Beijing.The tour
标点符号用的有点问题,语句不太连贯,时态有点小问题.
满分要看是什么标准了.我给你修改一下应该能拿高分.
TaiYuan is the capital of Shanxi Province (这里加'省'让读者更明白这不是一个国家), it is a big and beautiful city.(并为一句更连贯) There are more than 4.2 million people living here(时态).TaiYuan is located on the South-East side of BeiJing(更顺畅). Tourists enjoy(时态) eating the famous dumplings and noodles(时态+连贯). The JinCi park, a double-tower temple is a very beautiful and well-know tourism site. (舒畅) Any tourist should enjoy a stay. (你这里突然用第一人称感觉很别扭,帮你改了一下,第三人称)