we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as wish.这句话感觉很别扭,那错了,几个地方错了

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we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as wish.这句话感觉很别扭,那错了,几个地方错了
we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as wish.
这句话感觉很别扭,那错了,几个地方错了

we wanted to grow up,but when we became a older man,we don't have such nice life as wish.这句话感觉很别扭,那错了,几个地方错了
we wanted to grow up,but when we became older ,we don't have such nice life as we wished.

wanted改为want
became改为become
a older man改为an older man
as wish改为as we wish
此句整体为一般现在时,表达一种经常性动作。

wanted --> want
a older man --> an older man
as wish --> as we wish

older前应该用an,即为an older man