高手帮我看看这篇email有什么错误吗~Well,I know you are more busy than me,and I'm more lazy than you,so the email is always not in time,but hope you still feel these email fresh.letters always tell things which have happened,but they real

高手帮我看看这篇email有什么错误吗~Well,I know you are more busy than me,and I'm more lazy than you,so the email is always not in time,but hope you still feel these email fresh.letters always tell things which have happened,but they real
高手帮我看看这篇email有什么错误吗~
Well,I know you are more busy than me,and I'm more lazy than you,so the email is always not in time,but hope you still feel these email fresh.letters always tell things which have happened,but they really happened.
At the end of Spring Festival,my mother and I visited your maternal grandmother at her home.There are so photoes we took that day.I heard you are very busy at school and you can communicate with many students of famouse universities.It's so great.Your maternal grandmother is healthy,she visited many places in Spring Festival.She is so kind and easy to get along with.
In fact,I paid less attention to the festival than before.I missed him very much,we phoned to each everyday.He's my boyfriend.I don't know why I like him so much.He is not tall,not rich,not handsome,but humor and interesting.We have so much in common.But as Bacon said,the stage is more beholding to love than the life of man,there are so many unsatisfied things between us.We often have conflicts,specially in the busy days.But when we are all free,everything is OK.This is my story.How about you?

高手帮我看看这篇email有什么错误吗~Well,I know you are more busy than me,and I'm more lazy than you,so the email is always not in time,but hope you still feel these email fresh.letters always tell things which have happened,but they real
Well,I know you are busier than I,while I'm lazier than you,therefore the emails may not always be in time,yet,I hope they are still new to you.后面这句没看懂.
At the end of Spring Festival,my mother and I visited your grandma at her place.We took lots of photos then.I heard you are very busy at shcool,and you can communicate with many students from famous universities.It's so great.
Your grandma is healthy,and she visited many places during the holiday,and she's very kind and easy to get along with.
In fact,I paid less attention to the festival than before.I miss my boyfriend so much and we phoned each other everyday.I don't know why I like him so much,as he's not tall,or rich,ro handsome,but he's very humorous and interesting.We have so much in common.But as Bacon said,the stage is more beholding to love than the life of man.There are so many unsatisfying things between us.We often argue,especially in the busy days.But when we are free,everything is OK.
That's all my story.How about you?
帮你把语句顺了顺,里面有些小错误也改了,挺累的,

busy和lazy的比较级错拉- - 把Y改成I 加ER....
There are so photoes ...这句..你想表达的是很多照片..不能用SO 用MANY...或者a lot of..
we phoned to each ..改成we phoned each other
but humor and interesting....把最后那个有趣的 单词改成...

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busy和lazy的比较级错拉- - 把Y改成I 加ER....
There are so photoes ...这句..你想表达的是很多照片..不能用SO 用MANY...或者a lot of..
we phoned to each ..改成we phoned each other
but humor and interesting....把最后那个有趣的 单词改成interested...
interesting是指物的- -
We have so much in common 这句 有问题 但是我也不确定到底怎样改..
这句很中文式英语- -！...

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