帮我修改这篇英文文章吧!This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we s

帮我修改这篇英文文章吧!This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we s
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This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!
We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we screamed,all of us was very happy.We also went to a new supermarket in this city.The supermarket has a indoor park.Everyone could play here.There were many things to play.Then ,we went to a book store to read books.I read a book about Psychology,it was very intrersting that I want to be a Psychologist.I can’t blieve my eyes because in the past,Chaoyang was a really poor city.I see the future is going to be better!
We stayed in Chaoyang for 10 days,and I enjoyed myself very much!
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帮我修改这篇英文文章吧!This winter vacation,I went to my grandpa’s home with my family.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang—a place in Liaoning province.I had a great time!We played ice-skating on the river,it was very exciting.We laughed,we s
ChaoYang ,LiaoNing Province 地点大写.
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During this winter vacation, I went to my grandpa’s home with my parents.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang , a place in Liaoning province. I had a great time!
We played ice-skating on the river, and i...

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During this winter vacation, I went to my grandpa’s home with my parents.My grandpa lives in Chaoyang , a place in Liaoning province. I had a great time!
We played ice-skating on the river, and it was very exciting.We laughed, screamed,and all of us was very happy.We also went to a new supermarket in this city.The supermarket has a indoor park. Everyone could play here.There were many things to play.Then ,we went to a book store to read books.I read a book about Psychology,it was very intrersting that I want to be a Psychologist.I can’t blieve my eyes because in the past,Chaoyang was a really poor city.I think the future is going to be better!
We stayed in Chaoyang for 10 days, and I enjoyed myself very much!

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