小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病```帮忙修改下``小女子感激不敬 Dear All ,Hope you are well Sorry to say goo

小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病```帮忙修改下``小女子感激不敬 Dear All ,Hope you are well Sorry to say goo
小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,
各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病```帮忙修改下``小女子感激不敬
Dear All ,
Hope you are well
Sorry to say good-bye to everybody ,I will leave the company on 20th June .
It's my pleasure to thank you for all your support and love to me during the passed more than 2 years ,I feel so grateful to have had the chance to work with you and get to know so many of you.,and I do thank you very much to give me the opportunity to grow up
Now the company will direct cooperation with customer ,hope the company have a very successful future ,I reget the loss of this job ,but for me ,if something lost,there must be other thing won,also I was still young and there are many other things waiting for me to learn ,I want to go back to my hometown to do my own things ,I believe you can kindly understande
Say thanks again for your great help
Ms Green will take over my job in the future,please send all the relattion informations to her directly .
I wish you and your families a full life of good health and happiness always.And I will miss you all so much
If you are free,please keep in touch with me as belowing informations :
Tel :
Best Regards ,
Mabel

小女字求英文高手帮忙找下语病,各位大虾```以下是我写的辞职信``因为对自己的英文水平不是很自信``请帮忙找下有什麼语病```帮忙修改下``小女子感激不敬 Dear All ,Hope you are well Sorry to say goo
我稍微修改了一下.写得挺好的
Dear All ,
Sorry to say good-bye to everybody ,I will leave the company on 20th June .
It's my pleasure to thank you for all your support and love during the passed 2 years.I feel so grateful to have had the chance to know you and work with you,and also,thank you very much to give me the opportunity to be mature!
Now the company will direct cooperation with customer ,which ensures a successful future,I reget on the quit,but it is said losing also means gaining,I'm young and there are many things waiting ahead for me to learn.I want to go back to my hometown to do some business,I believe you can kindly understand !
Say thanks again for your great help !
Ms Green will take over my job in the future,please send all the relattion informations to her directly .
I wish you and your families a full life of good health and happiness always.And I will miss you all so much !
If you are free,please keep in touch with me as belowing informations :
Tel :
Best Regards ,
Mabel

Say thanks again for your great help !
这个SAY 去掉。其他没怎么看。

1.also I was still young - was 改成 am.
2.there are many other things waiting for me to learn - other things + that are
3. understande -后面没有e.
4.relattion informations - related information
5.please keep in touch with me as belowing informations - please keep in touch with me via below ways.

Dear All,
Hope you are well!
Sorry to say good-bye to every one of you, I will leave the company on 20th June.
It's my pleasure to thank you for all your love, help and support to me du...

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Dear All,
Hope you are well!
Sorry to say good-bye to every one of you, I will leave the company on 20th June.
It's my pleasure to thank you for all your love, help and support to me during the passed over 2 years. I feel so appreciate to have the chance to work with you and get to know so many of you, and I must thank you very much to provide me such great opportunity to grow up!
Now the company will cooperate with customer directly, so I hope the company will have a very successful future, I regret the loss of this job, but for me, if something lost, there must be other thing to get, also I am still young and there are many other things waiting for me to learn, I want to go back to my hometown to do my own business, I believe you can kindly understanding!
Say thanks again for your great help!
Ms Green will take over my job in the future, please send all the related information to her directly.
I wish you and your families a full life of good health and happiness always. And I will miss you all so much!
If you are free, please keep in touch with me with information below :
Tel : ***********
Email: *************
Best Regards ,
Mabel

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Dear All ,
Sorry to say good-bye to everybody , I will leave our company on 20th June for some private reasons.
Deep thanks for all your supports and love to me during the passed more than ...

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Dear All ,
Sorry to say good-bye to everybody , I will leave our company on 20th June for some private reasons.
Deep thanks for all your supports and love to me during the passed more than 2 years , I feel so grateful to have had the chance to work with you and get to know so many from you. , and I do thank you very much to give me the opportunity to grow up !
Now the company will direct cooperation with customer , hope the company have a very successful future , I reget the loss of this job ,but for me , if something lost,there must be other thing won, also I was still young and there are many other things waiting for me to learn , I want to go back to my hometown to do my own things , I believe you can understand!
Say thanks again for your great help !
Ms Green will take over my job in the future, please send all the relation informations to her directly .
I wish you and your families a full life of good health and happiness always. And I will miss you all!
If you are free, please keep in touch with me as following informations :
Tel : ***********
Email: *************
Best Regards ,
Mabel

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