作业帮我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?Now,Thanks to more and more trees are being cut down .Environment become bad.We have to protect environment.We shoud go to school by bike and do shopping by cloth bag.Don't use
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我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?Now,Thanks to more and more trees are being cut down .Environment become bad.We have to protect environment.We shoud go to school by bike and do shopping by cloth bag.Don't use
我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?
Now,Thanks to more and more trees are being cut down .Environment become bad.We have to protect environment.We shoud go to school by bike and do shopping by cloth bag.Don't use plastic bays.Don't throw around and do more cleaning.Planting trees is very important to protect.If we can do it every day.Our world will become beautiful.（本人初三水平）各位英语大仙帮我看看有什么错误?帮我指出来?
我写的关于保护环境的作文,英语高手帮我看看有错的吗?Now,Thanks to more and more trees are being cut down .Environment become bad.We have to protect environment.We shoud go to school by bike and do shopping by cloth bag.Don't use
错误不少,第一句就不行了,thank to 的意思是多亏,也不能写成thanks to 而且你怎么能说多亏了树被砍了,所以环境变差了呢.
一些拼写错误也不知道是不是打字打错的,比如plastic bays ,bags吧
还有一个是断句的问题,你打字全打的句号,没有逗号,我默认你会断句.
其他没有什么语法问题了
没有。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。
没看懂你要表达什么，第一句是个错句，短语用的不合适，完全是翻译汉语，没有英语，用词不当