大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up for studing,so they get up

大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up for studing,so they get up
大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!
A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up
for studing,so they get up late,they have no time to eat breakfast.And some parents give money to students,ask them to buy
breakfast on their own,but some students use the money to play computer games,so they have no money to buy breakfast.In fact,most of them have no time to eat breakfast.If we don't eat breakfast,we will get sick,and we won’t have enough energy to have lessons,so our marks will fall down.We should eat breakfast everyday,it’s good for our bodys and it makes us have enough energy.Please eat breakfast,why not?
灌水，不懂英语的就别来了，精通英语的帮我改下吧！谢谢了！

大家帮忙看下我的英语作文,帮我改下,可能会有很多错误,越快越好!A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up for studing,so they get up
A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up
for studying,so they get up late,and have no time to eat breakfast.For anther reason,some parents give money to students,and ask them to buy
breakfast on their own,but some students use the money to play computer games,so they have no money to buy breakfast.In fact,most of them have no time to eat breakfast.If we don't eat breakfast,we will get sick,and we won’t have enough energy to have lessons,so our marks will fall down.We should eat breakfast everyday,it’s good for our bodys and it makes us have enough energy.Please eat breakfast,why not?
大体没错,错的我改在原文了,不过注意用词,太过于中文化了……建议多看看英文原版材料……

应该用and连接get up late 和have no time to eat breakfast.后一句逗号后面用非限制定语从句,ask改为asking。

A survey shows that about 20% of the students inquiried have a bad habit of not having breakfast.because they always stay up 'late' at night for studing,
it’s good for our bodys --似乎是改成for our health 感觉好一些

A proper one:
A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up
for studying,so they get up late，they have n...

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A proper one:
A survey shows that about 20% of the students have a bad habit of not having breakfast.That’s because lots of students always stay up
for studying,so they get up late，they have no time to have breakfast.And for that reason some parents give their children money to have breakfast on their owm.However,most of them have no time to eat breakfast.without doubt,we will get sick and won’t have enough energy for lessons without breakfast.At the same time,our performances in the academic will not be so good any more.so all of us should make a good habit of having breakfast everyday on time,shouldn't we?
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