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看看我的 语法有没有错误superman returns the movie is very interesting,it is one of my best like movie,the movie is say a superman how to save people in need and how to beat bad man to help people,In order toportect the world ,He is a hero
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superman returns
the movie is very interesting,it is one of my best like movie,the movie is say a superman how to save people in need and how to beat bad man to help people,In order to
portect the world ,He is a hero in my heart,I like he very much ,I ofen have a dearm i can become a superman to help more and more people in need,the movie teach me many things make me understand that all men are created equal.so i like this movie ver much.
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superman returns
the movie is very interesting, and it is one of the best movies that I like .The movie talks about a superman to whom how to save people in need and how to beat ...

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superman returns
the movie is very interesting, and it is one of the best movies that I like .The movie talks about a superman to whom how to save people in need and how to beat bad men to help people in order to
portect the world .He is a hero in my heart,and I like him very much . I am always having a dearm of which i can become a superman to help more and more people in need.The movie teaches me many things and makes me understand that all men are created equally .So i like this movie ver much.

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