语法改错When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will i

语法改错When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will i
语法改错
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who was involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
帮我看看有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？

语法改错When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will i
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable (photograph改成photographs) with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who( was改成were) involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is (delighted改成delightful) and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life
请问一共几个错误?

我也想当记者哦
1、第二行中间photograph应为复数，变为photographs
2.第三行was变为are，其主语为some people，而且应该用一般现在时。
3.最后一行an改为a, unusual中首字母虽为元音字母U，但是其发音为辅音。
其他都不错，加油

When I was a student(可换成：As a student), I was eager to be a journalist.
Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph(改为：photographs) with ...

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When I was a student(可换成：As a student), I was eager to be a journalist.
Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph(改为：photographs) with a professional photographer who will assist/help更好 me in finishing the task. And I will interview some people who was(改为：are) involved in some special cases . I think the day like that is delighted(主语是the day,不能用delighted，改为：happy) and the job as a journalist is admirable. In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.(an不用改，因为是发/ʌ/）

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When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable (photograph改成photographs) with a professional photogra...

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When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable (photograph改成photographs) with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task. And I will interview some people who( was改成were) involved in some special cases . I think the day like that is (delighted改成delightful) and the job as a journalist is admirable. In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life
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When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I (got) the assignment from the editor and (went )out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who ...

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When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I (got) the assignment from the editor and (went )out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who (would) assist me in finishing the task. And I (would) interview some people who (were) involved in some special cases . I thought the day like that is delighted and the job as a journalist was admirable. Meanwhile ,it would let me live an unusual life.

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第一句不可以去掉i was，最后一句最好改为“I can't love it more!”（这是我最想要的生活！）