请各位高手帮我查找错误,改写优美句子很惊奇,昨晚那奇怪的女人居然发信息给我,跟我说天气要转了冷了,叫我注意保暖.只有她知道.今晚我听到我爷爷可能不久之后搬来我家住,我觉得挺不错

请各位高手帮我查找错误,改写优美句子很惊奇,昨晚那奇怪的女人居然发信息给我,跟我说天气要转了冷了,叫我注意保暖.只有她知道.今晚我听到我爷爷可能不久之后搬来我家住,我觉得挺不错
请各位高手帮我查找错误,改写优美句子
很惊奇,昨晚那奇怪的女人居然发信息给我,跟我说天气要转了冷了,叫我注意保暖.只有她知道.今晚我听到我爷爷可能不久之后搬来我家住,我觉得挺不错的.但当我听到我叔叔在他听到如果我爷爷在谁住,谁就能拿到一笔社保的钱之后,就想要爷爷去他家住.当我爷爷在他家住的时候,叔叔根本没照顾好他,我爷爷也很讨厌他.让我更生气的是,我叔叔说如果爷爷去他家住,每个月还得上交800元.真想不懂我爷爷为什么有这个让我非常讨厌的儿子.为什么他能这样对她的父亲?就只是为了钱.还好我爷爷说他再也不想到他家住了,这是他的意愿,我叔叔没有权利去阻止.to my surprise , last night the peculiar woman suddenly send a message to me for telling me that it will turn to clod,and noticing me to pay attention to my body.only she knows.Tonight I heard that my grandpa maybe live in my home later.I think it's great.However,when I heard that my uncle want my grandpa to live in his home because he heard that if whose home my grandpa live in,who can get some money from insurance.When my grandpa lived in his home, he didn't take good of him.And my grandpa hates him so much.What makes me more angry is that my uncle said if his father live in his home should hand in 800yuan every month.I have no idea why my grandpa has this son who I so hate.Why he can treat his father like this ,just for money!? Luckily,my grandpa said he would never live in his home and this is his deisire.My uncle has no power to change it.

请各位高手帮我查找错误,改写优美句子很惊奇,昨晚那奇怪的女人居然发信息给我,跟我说天气要转了冷了,叫我注意保暖.只有她知道.今晚我听到我爷爷可能不久之后搬来我家住,我觉得挺不错
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To my surprise,that strange woman send me a message last night telling me that the weather is getting cold,and that I should be more careful.Only she knows.When I heard that my grandpa might be moving in tonight,I think it's great.owever,when I heard that my uncle want my grandpa to live in his home because he heard that whoever that let my grandpa live with them will receive a fund from the social welfare office.When my grandpa was living in my uncle's home,he didn't take good care of him.My grandpa dislikes him as well.But what made me angry was that my uncles says that if my grandpa moves into his house,he will have to pay CNY $800 every month as rent.I cannot understand why my grandpa has such a hatable son.How can he treat his father like this?Just for money!Luckily,my grandpa said that he no longer wants to live in his house,and this is his wish,and my uncle has no right to stop him.
天上~
注：
1.peculiar是 特殊的；独特的；奇怪的；罕见的 的意思,与你要说的 奇怪的 相差很远.用词不当.
2.noticing me 在英文中是 注意到我 的意思,而不是 提醒我 的意思.用telling就可以.
3.insurance 是保险的意思,社保是社会保障,不是社会保险啊 - -
4.好好照顾某人的英文是 take good care of sb.不是 take good of sb.- -
5.hate是憎恨的意思,先不说血浓于水一个父亲不可能憎恨儿子,就说你的翻译就和你的原文不符,讨厌的英文是dislike.
6.句子不够流畅,还有有些地方可以用别的方式更好的表达
另,如果不明白,可以HI我~