大家帮我看下有没有语病?Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.

大家帮我看下有没有语病?Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.
大家帮我看下有没有语病?
Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .
（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.
（2）long long ago ,
people came to visit the castle ,some of them said that they have seen several
ghost and heared a little sob from ghost[ɡəʊst] unaccountably .
（3）Do you know why ghost appear and disappear in the castle?
Let us explain[ɪk'spleɪn] something to you about the ghost.
（4）Tower of London has ever served as prison['prɪzn],there is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] with instrument['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] under the prison .many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] meet with a tragic[ˈtrædʒɪk] death in the dungeon.（5）moreover,Outside Castle's Tower Hill is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n],so the guillotine has many ghosts without head.（6）besides,bloody tower is also a place of torture and death.it lies in the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.

大家帮我看下有没有语病?Today,let us introduce the tower of London to you .（1）As we all know,the tower of london is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],the castle is not a simple castle,it is said that the castle is filled with strange atmosphere.
Today,let me introduce the Tower of London.
（1）As we all know,the Tower of London is an old castle ['kɑ:sl],but it is not a regular castle.It is said that the castle is filled with mysterious stories.
（2）Some visitors claimed that they had seen ghosts and heard sob from ghosts[ɡəʊst].
（3）Do you know why ghosts appear in the castle?Let me explain[ɪk'spleɪn].
（4）Tower of London had served as a prison['prɪzn].There is a dungeon[ˈdʌndʒən] filled with instruments['ɪnstrəmənt] of torture['tɔ:tʃə(r)] in the prison.Many members of the nobility[nəʊ'bɪlətɪ] died tragically[ˈtrædʒɪk] in the dungeon.
5）Moreover,outside Castle's Tower Hill,there is a well-known guillotine[ˈgɪləti:n]which is surrounded by ghosts without head.
(6）In addition,Bloody Tower is also a place of torture and death.It locates at the southwest of castle.Queen Anne Boleyn(安妮博林）and Countess['kaʊntəs] Magritte（玛格丽特）were sentenced to death here.

1.the castle is not a simple castle,加上个just：the castle is not just a simple castle
2.strange atmosphere改成mystery atmosphere.