作业帮看这篇牛逼的英语作文有木有语法错误.我自己写的.
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看这篇牛逼的英语作文有木有语法错误.我自己写的.
看这篇牛逼的英语作文有木有语法错误.
我自己写的.
看这篇牛逼的英语作文有木有语法错误.我自己写的.
第二句应该是Are you in your parents' car?
第六句中的“one big city”,我觉得还是“a big city”比较好
第十一句的“one 13-year-old-girl”应该改成“a 13-year-old girl”
第十二句的“ever”是不是“every”
第十四句的“claamates”应改成“classmates”；"mather"应改成"mother";She's like a mother to me 我觉得应改成 She's like my mother
倒数第二句我觉得应改成 They have a dream that they want to have a plane
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写得不错哦，不过我有以下建议，你可以参考并稍作改动：
1.第二句缺少谓语，应为Do you go by your parents' car?
2.one big city in Mars->a big city on Mars，初次提及单数可数名词应用a.当然你想强调火星上只有一座大城市的话也可用one.
3.One 13-year-old-girl->One 13-yea...
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写得不错哦，不过我有以下建议，你可以参考并稍作改动：
1.第二句缺少谓语，应为Do you go by your parents' car?
2.one big city in Mars->a big city on Mars，初次提及单数可数名词应用a.当然你想强调火星上只有一座大城市的话也可用one.
3.One 13-year-old-girl->One 13-year-old girl
4.files ever school day->files to school every day
5.I love to play...->I love playing with my classmates.And I love my teacher because she's like a mother to me.
6.It is their dream to have a plane.-> They dream of having a plane.
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