作业帮帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误一定要细细检查May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of
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帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误一定要细细检查May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of
帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误
一定要细细检查
May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of people died.I was very sad when I heard of the news.
All the Chinese people get together to overcome the difficulties.Most people donated money to them.,so did I.The soldiers and the doctors tried their best to save more people and they never give up!
I hope the Sichuan peole can rebuid their hometown early.I believe tomorrow will be better!
帮我检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误一定要细细检查May 12th is an unforgettable day for all the Chinese people.There was a serious earthquake on that day in Sichuan Province.The buildings fell down suddenly and thousands of
我晕倒了,楼上为什么连一些拼错了的单词都没有看出来呢?还照着copy下来...
1、英文字典里面没有unforgettable这个词.用memorial更加合适
2、died是“死了”,是没有错,但是在这里用were killed更恰当,表示“被地震所杀”
3、get together要改成got together,因为那里都是过去时,突然用get不合适
4、save more people也不对,没有人会这样说,想要表达“尽量多的人”应该说成save people as many as possible
5、give up还是要改成gave up
6、rebuid拼写错误,应该是rebuild；peole也是拼写错了,应该是people
7、最后一句不符合英文的习语,英文里面都是说的tomorrow will be another day,而不是better