英语高手帮看看这篇文章有什么语法错误 In order to wield the spring the common people,ask the country to rear in a pen all wild tigers!Very are perhaps many the human to say that,you such said or protects the wild tiger?Ya,your everyb

英语高手帮看看这篇文章有什么语法错误 In order to wield the spring the common people,ask the country to rear in a pen all wild tigers!Very are perhaps many the human to say that,you such said or protects the wild tiger?Ya,your everyb
英语高手帮看看这篇文章有什么语法错误
In order to wield the spring the common people,ask the country to rear in a pen all wild tigers!
Very are perhaps many the human to say that,you such said or protects the wild tiger?
Ya,your everybody sits at home says the protection tiger,the sumptuous lifestyle.
But wields the spring that side the farmer suffers great hardships survives for the livelihood,but tiger's existence actually short farmer way out!Farmer Lian Yangniu could not raise,even the Lianshan all did not dare,their life was threaten all the time!
Why,why were you in the city the sumptuous lifestyle,all right also jump just the tube to dance,eat swing 1 pill,but our farmer was responsible to have actually to protect the tiger?
Why,why on your mouth said the protection tiger,does not have the practical action actually,but our farmer wants to sacrifice actually,we must protect the tiger,but we must sacrifice the cow freely actually,the sacrifice (tiger descend a mountain frequently,now people all did not dare to recede)
Suggested intensely wields the spring the farmer collective to kill by poison the tiger,everybody entire motion,law not then audiences,only then comes to select imposing,the country can take this matter!
I am not the common people who wields the spring that side,I only am thought the protection tiger is unfair to the protectorate villagers!On our all mouth said the protection tiger,actually does not have what practical action actually.

英语高手帮看看这篇文章有什么语法错误 In order to wield the spring the common people,ask the country to rear in a pen all wild tigers!Very are perhaps many the human to say that,you such said or protects the wild tiger?Ya,your everyb
1.at the begin应该是at the beginning,beginning是名词
2.how bed deed!应该是what bad deed!感叹句修饰名词的用what.
3.时态用的前后不一致,乱七八糟.

用的是汉语的表达方式，大部分句子不和英语表达习惯。建议多用系表结构。还有注意长短句子结合，不要一个句子中一个劲用but，换点别的表达方式。