英语翻译由于水平太低,但为了张扬个性所一只好用英语喽!内容:"大家好我叫何力,来自本年级的7班!我成绩平平但却有一颗能奋斗的心,我的爱好是听音乐!早就听说初一四班是一个很好的班级

英语翻译由于水平太低,但为了张扬个性所一只好用英语喽!内容:"大家好我叫何力,来自本年级的7班!我成绩平平但却有一颗能奋斗的心,我的爱好是听音乐!早就听说初一四班是一个很好的班级
英语翻译
由于水平太低,但为了张扬个性所一只好用英语喽!
内容:"大家好我叫何力,来自本年级的7班!我成绩平平但却有一颗能奋斗的心,我的爱好是听音乐!早就听说初一四班是一个很好的班级体!所以抱着一颗真诚的心加入初一四班这个大家庭里!以后请大家多多关照!"
单词要符合初一水平哦

英语翻译由于水平太低,但为了张扬个性所一只好用英语喽!内容:"大家好我叫何力,来自本年级的7班!我成绩平平但却有一颗能奋斗的心,我的爱好是听音乐!早就听说初一四班是一个很好的班级
我怎么知道初一是什么水平啊

Hello every body! My name is he li.I comes from class 7.下句话别说,不好,稍改一下.I am very friendly and harmful.My hobby is music.Long long ago ,it's said that grand 1 class 4 is a good class.SO I want to take part in this class.
Thank you !

我觉得上楼翻译的有几个错误,有必要纠正一下:
I am very friendly and harmful."harmful"的意思是"有害的",怎么能说我很友好,然后又说"有害"呢?会让人笑话的.
我觉得这样翻译会更好:Although I don't have a high point in study,I have a struggled heart.
还有下一句Lo...

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我觉得上楼翻译的有几个错误,有必要纠正一下:
I am very friendly and harmful."harmful"的意思是"有害的",怎么能说我很友好,然后又说"有害"呢?会让人笑话的.
我觉得这样翻译会更好:Although I don't have a high point in study,I have a struggled heart.
还有下一句Long long ago 的意思是"很久很久以前",用在这里不大合适.我的翻译是:I have heard that Class 4,Grade 1 is a great class before.
还可以加几句这样的话:
I think this class is just like a big family,everyone here is one of the family members.So I hope to join it . I'll get on well with each other and make our tomorrow more beautiful.[我觉得这个班级就好比一个大家庭,每个人都是这个家庭里的一员.所以我希望能够假如此集体.我将会和大家好好相处,让我们的明天更加美好]

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Hello I to call what strength, comes from this grade 7 classes! Myresult is average but actually has the heart which can struggle, myhobby listens to the music! Already heard the first day four classe...

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Hello I to call what strength, comes from this grade 7 classes! Myresult is average but actually has the heart which can struggle, myhobby listens to the music! Already heard the first day four classesare a very good class and grade body! Therefore holds a sincere heartto join in the first day four class of this big families! Later willask everybody many to look after! Thanks!

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