求英语作文2篇,200词左右最好有点语法错误,拼写错误.不要给我复制文章,要作文.

求英语作文2篇,200词左右最好有点语法错误,拼写错误.不要给我复制文章,要作文.
求英语作文2篇,200词左右
最好有点语法错误,拼写错误.不要给我复制文章,要作文.

求英语作文2篇,200词左右最好有点语法错误,拼写错误.不要给我复制文章,要作文.
1.My Winter Vacation
During the winter vacation I did a lot of things.But I thank this is the most meaningful thing.Do you want to know what it is?Let me tell you.
One day I was taking a bus to the park.There were so many people on the bus that some people had to stands.Suddenly an old man got on the bus.The driver said to the passengers,"Please give the old men a seat." But nobody gave his seat to him.I was angry at this.In our society respecting the old and cherishing the young was a traditional virtue.I'd like to say "Please offer your love to others!"
From this thing I recognize that it's important for us to help the people in difficulties.
2.My Pet
My pet is a lovely dog.It's name is 'dian dian'.because there are a lot of black circle on its skin.the 'dian dian' is very friendly.Many childen likes play with him.His favourite food is meat bones.H is favourite toy is a doll.’dian dian ’ likes to run very much.It can running very fast and it has a girl friend.its name 'na na'.there are a lot of black circle on its skin,too.I like my pet very much.It is a good pet!
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1.During the summer holiday, I work as a tutor, because i want to earn some momey . I taught one little girl and one little boy. They studyed very well and very quickly.I taught them 2 hours per day....

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1.During the summer holiday, I work as a tutor, because i want to earn some momey . I taught one little girl and one little boy. They studyed very well and very quickly.I taught them 2 hours per day. First, I taught them some new words for each lesson. Then, I asked them to listen the radio for that lesson. After that , I asked them to read the dialog, if they have some questions about the dialog, i will help them to solve the question.
Both of them are very clever. I am very happy when I am teaching them.I am also very proud that I can teach them so well and they have also learned much knowledge from me. Although i do not have enough time to play, and it is very hot during the holiday, but i feel that this is the fullest holiday I have spend.这里有语法和时态错误的

2. One Sunday my mother made me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She ask me to take good care of him
While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly the wind was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile and heard the birds sing on the trees.There'r e a lot of apples on the t ree.They are big and red.My brother an d I wanted to eat them.But we didn't pick them.The view was indeed very beautiful
When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.I was very happy to tell my mother about it.My mother was happy,too.We have a good time.
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