帮忙修改英语演讲稿First,boys and girls,please look at my face.Do you know what I am doing?Yes,quite right,I am smiling.I like smiling,because it makes me more confident and more popular.However,I didn't think so before.When I was younger,I w

帮忙修改英语演讲稿First,boys and girls,please look at my face.Do you know what I am doing?Yes,quite right,I am smiling.I like smiling,because it makes me more confident and more popular.However,I didn't think so before.When I was younger,I w
帮忙修改英语演讲稿
First,boys and girls,please look at my face.Do you know what I am doing?Yes,quite right,I am smiling.
I like smiling,because it makes me more confident and more popular.However,I didn't think so
before.When I was younger,I was disappointed in my appearance.I thought I was so ugly,especially
when I smile.For this reason,I would like to stay alone at school the most time.However,my teacher Miss
Li made me change myself.She seemed knew my trouble well and encouraged me,"If you are not self-
confident,it's impossible to make others believe in you.If you cannot go beyond your limits,it's impossible
to make any improvement."After all these words,she smiled to me and said,"you are so cute when you
smile.Belive in yourself."
I was really shocked at that moment.When I went home that day,I standed in front of the mirror and
tried to smile.It's unbelievable that I was not ugly in my teacher's eyes.After that,I really became more
confident and started to love to smile.To my surprise,more and more people said I was cute and I
found my life is much more colourful with confident now.
Here,boys and girls.I would like to beyond myself here today.I never try to sing an English song in front
of so many people before.But I would like to try today,would you like to give me some applause?
Thank you.Although I know I am not a good singer.I just want to change myself and do something I
am in nervous.I told myself so many times "I can" before I standed here and luckly I did.Of course I
want to get the price today.But this is not the most important now,I beyond myself just now and this
is the best for myself.That's all.Thank you.

帮忙修改英语演讲稿First,boys and girls,please look at my face.Do you know what I am doing?Yes,quite right,I am smiling.I like smiling,because it makes me more confident and more popular.However,I didn't think so before.When I was younger,I w
1 especially when I smile→especially when I'm smiling.前边强调了特别是.时候.所以这里用动词ing形式表示微笑的时候自认为最难看.
2 I would like to stay alone at school the most time.→I'd like to spend most of the time staying at school alone.spend time doing sth.这样也顺多了.
3 you are so cute when you smile.→you're so cute when you're smiling.
4 more and more people said I was cute and I found my life is much more colourful with confident now.→ was 改为 am.因为你很cute 已经是个大家公认的事实.confident改为名词形式confidence.
5 Here,boys and girls.I would like to beyond myself here today.→去掉一个 here.建议去掉前边的那个.
6 I never try...→ I never tried...以前从来没试过,不能用原型,要用过去式.
7 I am in nervous.→ I'm nervous.或 I felt nervous just now.
8 before I standed here and luckly I did.→ before standing here and lucklily,I did it!
9 get the price→ get the prize 得奖是“prize”.
10 for myself→to myself 对我自己来说 或者改为 for me
PS：里面还有些别别扭扭的句子,不是很符合地道的表达方式.但是明显的也就这些了.