请大神帮我看看这段英文,哪里有错Along with the high-speed development of the computer science and Internet,chatting on line has been an important method in our communication.Comparing with E-mail and telephone,the chat-line service is m

请大神帮我看看这段英文,哪里有错Along with the high-speed development of the computer science and Internet,chatting on line has been an important method in our communication.Comparing with E-mail and telephone,the chat-line service is m
请大神帮我看看这段英文,哪里有错
Along with the high-speed development of the computer science and Internet,chatting on line has been an important method in our communication.Comparing with E-mail and telephone,the chat-line service is more real-time and effective.The subject under discussion adopts the method of the software project, Comprehensive use of designing technique and the network technology.The project use Visual C++ 6.0 as the development tools,studies under the TCP/IP protocol MYQQ of chat rooms.

请大神帮我看看这段英文,哪里有错Along with the high-speed development of the computer science and Internet,chatting on line has been an important method in our communication.Comparing with E-mail and telephone,the chat-line service is m
Along with the high-speed development of computer science and the internet
那个“the"的地方不对,因为computer science不是一样东西,但是internet是
online chatting has become an important method
chatting online是动词,所以不能变成一个方式,但是online chatting是名词,可以.然后,along with.的发展,...has become,不是has been
Comparing with e-mails and phone calls,
The subject under discussion adopts the method of software project management
在software project前面不用the,但是后面应该加个management吧?我对电脑不熟,但是知道software project management是一个短语
紧接着的那个comprehensive要小写,designing techniques (复式),network technology前面不用the,但是需要逗号
,comprehensive use of designing techniques,and network technology
The project uses(复数) Visual C++ 6.0 as development tools (不需要the)
 

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Where is it?This chat tool adopts client/server mechanism(C/S) and TCP.It is composed of two components:the server and the client.这一聊天工具使用了客户/服务器机制及TCP。 它由两个部分组成：服务器和客户。恩恩，翻译我知道，麻烦您看下 我发的 从头到尾有没有语法错误什...

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comparing with 换成 compared with