200字左右有点要求 要写关于在哪里旅游的桂林、或海边的旅游经历 真实点 想要参考 或者一篇英语日记也可以 也是200字左右 要通顺 最好不要有用词错误 和句式错误 我想参考 写的好就追加

200字左右有点要求 要写关于在哪里旅游的桂林、或海边的旅游经历 真实点 想要参考 或者一篇英语日记也可以 也是200字左右 要通顺 最好不要有用词错误 和句式错误 我想参考 写的好就追加
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有点要求 要写关于在哪里旅游的桂林、或海边的旅游经历 真实点 想要参考 或者一篇英语日记也可以 也是200字左右 要通顺 最好不要有用词错误 和句式错误 我想参考 写的好就追加分数

200字左右有点要求 要写关于在哪里旅游的桂林、或海边的旅游经历 真实点 想要参考 或者一篇英语日记也可以 也是200字左右 要通顺 最好不要有用词错误 和句式错误 我想参考 写的好就追加
）《钢铁是怎样炼成的》
汉语：说到《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这本书,想必大家对它并不陌生吧!书里讲了一位坚强,勇敢的主人公保尔·柯察金.
读了《钢铁是怎样炼成的》这本书后,我领悟到:一个人的毅力对他的一生是有很大影响的.就说这本书中的主人公保尔·柯察金吧,他的一生非常坎坷,然而他凭什么使自己继续活下去呢 是毅力.毅力给了他无穷的力量,老天也使他有了三次生命.自从认识水兵朱赫来以来,他的心被共产党吸引住了.经过几番波折,他终于如愿以偿,成为了一名共产党员.他出生入死,英勇杀敌.在战争中他也受了不少伤.最严重的一次就是被弹片击中头部,死里逃生.痊愈后,保尔没有忘记党,拿起新的武器,重返战斗队伍,开始了新的生活!
他十几岁就立足杀场,英勇杀敌,热爱祖国,在战场上,他被砍了好几刀都大难不死,为什么 仍然是毅力.年轻的他后来疾病缠身,但他仍不停地忘我工作,有休假疗伤的机会他也不愿意放弃工作,毅力真是一种锲而不舍的精神啊!
Talking about "How the Steel Was Tempered" This book,surely it is no stranger to everyone bar!Book talked about a strong,brave hero Pavel Korchagin.
Read the "How the Steel Was Tempered" This book I learned that:a person's perseverance in his life is very much affected.Say that this book hero Pavel Korchagin,he's life is very rough,but he himself continues to live on what basis it is perseverance.perseverance gave him infinite power,God also gave him three life.Zhuhe Lai has been since the understanding of the sailors,and his heart was the Communist Party attracted lived.After a series of twists and turns,he finally got his wish,becoming a Communist.he go through fire and heroically fighting the enemy.in the war,he also affected a lot of injuries.The most serious one is hit in the head by shrapnel,
Survived.Healed,Paul did not forget the party,pick up new weapons and return to the fighting team,started a new life!
He was a teenager killed on the base field,'s fighting,love the motherland,and on the battlefield,he cut down several knives have survived,why is still perseverance.Young,he was sick,but he still kept ecstasy work,leave the opportunity to heal,he is not willing to give up work,persistence and perseverance is really a kind of ah!

既然用词错误和句式错误你都能看出来，干吗不自己写歌正确的