我写的英语作文,nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides
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我写的英语作文,nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides
我写的英语作文,
nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides,keeping a pet also has its disadvantages.on a hand,it makes our room dirty ,mess,also can make some noise .on the other hand ,it brings extra cost in our life.in a world,keeping a pet has both advantages and disadvantages.as far as I am concerned,an old man can keep a pet,because the old man has time to look after the pet,the small animals will be good friends.
我写的英语作文,nowdays,more and more people are keeping pets.Keeping a pet has many advantages.For example,a pet can bring some happies to us,it can become our good friend ,making our life more colorful,however,just as every coin has two sides
happies改为happiness.
on a hand改为on the one hand
in a world 改为in a word
其他没什么错误,注意细节.这篇文章写得还不错,有些用法挺不简单的,你是初中还是高中?
第2行 make
通俗易懂 yeasbod 已经把你的问题改正了