作业帮帮我检查下我写的英文有没有语法问题.My major is industrial design.After three months of study.I more and more like this major.Because what the industrial designers do is to improve People's lives and to help people in need.This is wha
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帮我检查下我写的英文有没有语法问题.My major is industrial design.After three months of study.I more and more like this major.Because what the industrial designers do is to improve People's lives and to help people in need.This is wha
帮我检查下我写的英文有没有语法问题.
My major is industrial design.After three months of study.I more and more like this major.Because what the industrial designers do is to improve People's lives and to help people in need.This is what I want to do.Although I am far from Fujian,but life is also full of joy.I have 5 very good roommates!They are friendly,lovely girl.We went to class together,eat together,learn together,and play together.Life is full of sun.How lucky I am!Now I want to do is get good grades in my studies.Efforts to achieve the target and my dream.
帮我检查下我写的英文有没有语法问题.My major is industrial design.After three months of study.I more and more like this major.Because what the industrial designers do is to improve People's lives and to help people in need.This is wha
1.I more and more like this major 最好改成 I like this major more and more.
2.People's lives 应该用单数,life表示生活时是不可数的
3.Although I am far from Fujian,but life is also full of joy.去掉but或者although,这两个词不能同时出现,用although或者though的时候表示转折可以用yet或者不用.
4.They are friendly,lovely girl.girl用复数girls
5.We went to class together,eat together,learn together,and play together.这句也不算是错误,但是很累赘,可以写成 We went to class,eat ,learn and play together.
6.Life is full of sun.我理解你的意思应该是想说生活充满阳光吧~所以把sun改成sunshine比较好.
7.Now I want to do is get good grades in my studies.应该是一个主语从句,要在I 前面加一个引导词what.而且get这个动词原形不能作表语,要么用getting,要么用to get
8.target 应该是和 reach搭配用的,achieve可以和dream一起用,但是和target不太合适.
就是这样啦~别看我列出这么多,其实总体来说也没什么特别大的问题
希望LZ能明白这些细节