作业帮英语语法帮忙检查帮忙看看下慢这段短文有什么语法错误?非常感谢!Our life without water, because of the progress of the society, with the advancing industrialization (industrialization) and waste water, earth ever (water) less
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英语语法帮忙检查帮忙看看下慢这段短文有什么语法错误?非常感谢!Our life without water, because of the progress of the society, with the advancing industrialization (industrialization) and waste water, earth ever (water) less
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帮忙看看下慢这段短文有什么语法错误?非常感谢!
Our life without water, because of the progress of the society, with the advancing industrialization (industrialization) and waste water, earth ever (water) less water will die, life is not fade (), so mankind should cherish (treasure), otherwise the last remaining fresh water will be your tears, how do we save water? Then from our side of the small drops, for example: bath water, toilet water and water use for us, let us live as a contribution to water.
1. 随着工业化(industrialization)的推进，地球上的淡水(fresh water)越来越少。
2. 生命没水就要消亡(disappear)，因此人类要珍惜(treasure)淡水。
3. 我们如何节约用水。
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英语语法帮忙检查帮忙看看下慢这段短文有什么语法错误?非常感谢!Our life without water, because of the progress of the society, with the advancing industrialization (industrialization) and waste water, earth ever (water) less
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with the develop of industrialization,the pure water resources on earth become fewer and fewer.water is basic essential element of life,so we should treasure the precious fortune nature leave for us.
we should take steps to save water in our daily life.when we taling shower,we can switch out the tap now and then instead of keeping it running all the time.
if everyone of us help to make a contribution,the world will become more harmonious for us to live.