英语 请帮我修改一下演讲稿中的语法错误,明天要用很着急!Introductionof my friendMorning,ladies and gentlemen.Today,I’ll introduce a friend of mineto you.At the first sight of him,I thought he’s so funny.And at the firstheari

英语 请帮我修改一下演讲稿中的语法错误,明天要用很着急!Introductionof my friendMorning,ladies and gentlemen.Today,I’ll introduce a friend of mineto you.At the first sight of him,I thought he’s so funny.And at the firstheari
英语 请帮我修改一下演讲稿中的语法错误,明天要用很着急!
Introductionof my friend
Morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today,I’ll introduce a friend of mineto you.
At the first sight of him,I thought he’s so funny.And at the firsthearing of his name,I imagine Mini Burger of KFC.(You know,the cheapest hamburger of KFC.) He shares some common features with Mini Burger.So can youguess who he is?Yes,he’s Sam of our class.
From the appearance,he’s not tall and fat.So he’s a mini boy.
Much like the meat pie of Mini Burger is pressed from both sides of thebread,so does Sam.He’s introverted and shy .Seldom does he speak to otherpeople especially girls in an alien environment.He has a strong sense of self protectionas well.He’ll not risk going to the dangerous place or playing with unfamiliarpeople as he knows he’s necessary to his family,teachers and surroundingfriends.He’s full of responsibility for his safety with no need worryingabout.
The meat pie to Mini Burger is what principle to a man.Without themeat pie,it’ll be tasteless.Without the principle,the man cannot be called aman.As the saying goes,being smooth on the surface,but firm at heart is animportant interpersonal skills.He’s sure to practice the skills.Towards mostof the things,he’s tolerant.But the principles of him cannot be break up byanyone.For example,never will he cross the road when the red lights are on orjump a queue no matter how long it is.Moreover,you don’t need to worry aboutwhether he’ll owe money to you.He doesn’t owe anybody anything.
But whatever happens,one thing will not be changed-his hobby of eatingMini Burger.

英语 请帮我修改一下演讲稿中的语法错误,明天要用很着急!Introductionof my friendMorning,ladies and gentlemen.Today,I’ll introduce a friend of mineto you.At the first sight of him,I thought he’s so funny.And at the firstheari
From the appearance,he’s not tall or fat,just a mini boy.
The meat pie of Mini Burger is pressed from both sides of thebread,and so does Sam.//Sam is much like the meat pie of mini Burger,which is pressed from both sides of thebread.
He’s full of responsibility for his safety with no need worryingabout.你要表达什么?
The meat pie to Mini Burger is like principle to a man.
And the principles of him cannot be broken up by anyone.