求帮英文作文改错,错的单词,语法.My university life is interesting and different from before.Though I am a new college student.I also make many friends and learn from them.University is different from high school.I living without parents.

求帮英文作文改错,错的单词,语法.My university life is interesting and different from before.Though I am a new college student.I also make many friends and learn from them.University is different from high school.I living without parents.
求帮英文作文改错,错的单词,语法.
My university life is interesting and different from before.Though I am a new college student.I also make many friends and learn from them.
University is different from high school.I living without parents.But I get more free time.I can do everything in my opinion.I can play computer games every day.Though I am happy now.I can't achieve succeed in future.
But I believe by myself.and I can study and living by myself to achieve succeed.

求帮英文作文改错,错的单词,语法.My university life is interesting and different from before.Though I am a new college student.I also make many friends and learn from them.University is different from high school.I living without parents.
My university life is very interesting and different from before.我大学的生活很有趣而且跟以前不一样.
Though I am a new college student,I have already made many friends and learned a lot from them.虽然我是新生,但是我已经交了很多朋友并且从他们身上也得意不少.
Universities are different from high schools.（注：在泛指时如果是可数名词记得要用名词复数）大学和高中不同.
For example,I get to live without my parents.例如,我可以不用跟父母同住.
This freedom is so good that I can do anything I want,such as playing video games everyday.这种自由很好因为我可以做任何我想做的东西,例如每天玩电动.
I am pretty satisfied with the status-quo.我对现状很满意.status-quo现状.
However,I understand this sluggishness will get me nowhere near my future goals.然而我明白这种懒散不会让我走近我未来的目标的.
Futhermore,I am confident that I can be self-disciplined even when I am living by myself and make the best of every moment to be one step closer to success.还有,我有自信尽管独居时我会有自律性的,而且还会让每一刻都过的最好,这都是为了一步步接近成功的.

before—high/ middle school; 去掉though; 在I 前加and; living—live; but—so; though —and；I can't 前加maybe； by— in；两个 succeed都改为successful。

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My university life is interesting and different from before, though I am still a new college student. I also make many new friends and learn from them.
University is different from high...

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My university life is interesting and different from before, though I am still a new college student. I also make many new friends and learn from them.
University is different from high school. I live here without my parents. But I get more free time. I can do anything I like. For example, I can play computer games everyday. Although I would be very happy if I play games everyday, I know I can achieve nothing in that case.
The most important thing is that I believe in myself. I can study and live here all by myself. I believe I will have a splendid(wonderful) future!
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My university life is interesting and different from （my life） before.Though I am a new college student.(,) I also(can) make many friends and learn from them.
( A) university is different from (a...

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My university life is interesting and different from （my life） before.Though I am a new college student.(,) I also(can) make many friends and learn from them.
( A) university is different from (a) high school. I (am) living without (my) parents.But I get more free time.I can do everything in my opinion.I can play computer games every day.Though I am happy now.(, I am not sure whether) I can't(can) achieve succeed(success) in future.
But I believe by(in) myself. and(X) I can study and living(live) by myself to achieve succeed(success).

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