改正英语作文 第一次正式写英语作文 肯定有大部分错误 Geography is one of the subject in middle school .in my idea .I think one of the most important subject is Geography Geography is known by people.because Geography is a kind o

改正英语作文 第一次正式写英语作文 肯定有大部分错误 Geography is one of the subject in middle school .in my idea .I think one of the most important subject is Geography Geography is known by people.because Geography is a kind o
改正英语作文 第一次正式写英语作文 肯定有大部分错误
Geography is one of the subject in middle school .in my idea .I think one of the most important subject is Geography
Geography is known by people.because Geography is a kind of common knowledage .
Geography is interesting and important .because it make us to know earth and maps .it is very useful so i am keen on geography .but.some of the people think of geography so boring that them can't study well .perhaps geography is boring it's true but we must learn to geography because it is part of our life

改正英语作文 第一次正式写英语作文 肯定有大部分错误 Geography is one of the subject in middle school .in my idea .I think one of the most important subject is Geography Geography is known by people.because Geography is a kind o
1.one of the subject 应该改为one of the subjects 多门课之一
2.in my idea 建议改为 in my opinion 在我看来
3.one of the most important subject 这一句有问题,既然是最重要的,肯定不会有很多了,建议改为the most important one one代替subject
4.第一个because建议改成for ,for 表示原因的时候语气最弱,而且不能放在句首
5.make us to know 改为make us know make sb do sth 使某人做某事,后面接动词原形
6.earth 表示地球时前面最好加the ,应该为the earth或者the Earth
7.the people 最好改成people ,people 是集体名词,前面一般不加定冠词,直接改成some people
8.think of 最好还改成think ,再在geography后面添上is
9.them 改成they 作主语是不用宾格
10.perhaps geography is boring it's true建议改为perhaps geography is boring ,so it is.
so it is就表示它确实是的,表示对之前的肯定
11.learn to geography 改为learn geography .learn sth / learn to do sth

Geography is one of the subjects in middle school. In my opinion, it's also one of the most important subjects.
Geography is known by people, because it is a kind of common ...

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Geography is one of the subjects in middle school. In my opinion, it's also one of the most important subjects.
Geography is known by people, because it is a kind of common knowledage .
Geography is interesting and important, because it makes us learn the earth and maps . It is very useful and I am keen on it, but some people think geography is so boring that they can't study it well . Perhaps it's true that geography is boring, but we must learn geography because it is a part of our life.

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