小学三年级作文童话故事

小学三年级作文童话故事
小学三年级作文童话故事

小学三年级作文童话故事
小猴自打懂事来就没有见过自己的妈妈,也没有名字.小时候就知道在深林了乱窜,爱作弄别人,它没有吃的还喜欢偷别人的吃的.大家都讨厌它,所以大家就叫它淘气包.
冬天到了,小猴没有准备过冬的粮食,它真的很饿,怎么办呢?小猴眼睛一转,转身就跑了出去.它去干什么呢,原来它又想去偷别人的东西了.外面下雪了,很冷,风一吹,小猴一哆嗦,它突然闻到有一阵阵香味直往它的鼻孔钻,小猴揉了揉鼻子,眯着眼睛顺着香味往前走,走呀走呀,它看见了一间小树屋.小猴在树屋前徘徊了很久,突然 吱 呀 一声 门打开了 ,小猴抬头一看原来是猩猩老婆婆的家,以前它经常在猩猩婆婆的地里破坏东西,还被捉到过.小猴害怕了,它想逃,刚想转身就听见婆婆说；“原来是淘淘呀!我当是谁大冬天在我家门口呆着呢!快进来吧,屋里暖和哦!”小猴看着猩猩婆婆,两个眼睛热热的,跟着婆婆进了屋.
婆婆把刚才做好的饼给了小猴,小猴抓着热乎乎的饼,心里好像都暖了,闻着香味,小猴吞了吞口水说；“婆婆,我真的可以吃嘛?”婆婆摸着小猴的头笑着说；“傻孩子,吃吧.”小猴狼吞虎咽的就把东西吃了,舒服的打了个饱嗝.
婆婆招了招手说；“淘淘呀!以后可不能淘气了,这样别人会不喜欢的,淘淘要做讨人厌的小孩吗?”
淘淘摇了摇头说：“不要,我要做婆婆喜欢的小孩”
“这才是乖孩子,小猴你知道以前有只猴很厉害哦!它叫孙悟空,它没有父母,但是它会72般变化,一个跟头十万八千里,上天入地无所不能.婆婆也不期望你能和它一样,希望你能幸福快乐的生活,以前你很淘气给大家添了很多的麻烦,以后你要尽你所能帮助大家.这样大家才会喜欢你知道吗?”婆婆语重心长的说道.
小猴把头低着,不知道它在想什么,但是这个冬天将不再寒冷了,
小猴在猩猩婆婆这度过了它生命中最美的一个冬天.
冬去春来,万物复苏,小猴也蹦蹦跳跳的出来活动了,它变了,不再淘气了,大家也都喜欢他了,大家现在不叫它淘气包了,叫他淘淘.小猴淘淘现在很幸福也很快乐.
冬天又来了但这个冬天它有足够的粮食过冬,淘淘想到了婆婆,它来到婆婆家,可是它敲了很久的门也没有人答应,小猴失望了,难过的底下了头.一步一步往回走……
小猴淘淘记着婆婆的话,幸福的过每一天,帮助那些需要帮助的人,小朋友们要珍惜身边爱你的人哦!

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白雪公主
善良美丽的白雪公主与王子结婚后生下了一个既可爱又漂亮的小公主。这一天，可恶的王后望镜子问：“魔镜，魔镜，谁是这个世界上最美丽的女人？”魔镜不知思索地对这个王后说：“是白雪公主的女儿。”
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这应该是一篇白雪公主的新编，小作者进行了大胆的创新，一个邪恶的王后终于被感化了，向善成为本文新的立意。小作者对故事的设计比较合理，首先很自然地衔接了原文故事情节，抓住王后的嫉妒性，推动了故事的发展；其次在情节上的设计上很费了一番心思，显得波澜有致，富有吸引力，最后的结局也是皆大欢喜，人的天性中的美和善得到有力的弘扬。稍嫌不足的是，在王后的感化瞬间似乎过于简单平淡，在大家眼里，一贯邪恶的王后，应该不是那么容易被感化的，或许需要一些特别的设计，去触动她内心深处的柔软一面吧。

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