请求高手帮做一道英语改错题,共10处错误My aunt was out of work in 2009.At a very beginning,she was afraid of being laughing at by others.She was worried about and wondered which she could find another job or not.It was hard for her to

请求高手帮做一道英语改错题,共10处错误My aunt was out of work in 2009.At a very beginning,she was afraid of being laughing at by others.She was worried about and wondered which she could find another job or not.It was hard for her to
请求高手帮做一道英语改错题,共10处错误
My aunt was out of work in 2009.At a very beginning,she was afraid of being laughing at by others.She was worried about and wondered which she could find another job or not.It was hard for her to find a good job though she didn't have special skills.But some time late,she was no longer afraid of being looked down.She manages to find a job as a waitress at a teahouse and now she is a manager through hard work,She does well in her job,from where she can earn a lot of money.She have set the laid-off workers a good example.

请求高手帮做一道英语改错题,共10处错误My aunt was out of work in 2009.At a very beginning,she was afraid of being laughing at by others.She was worried about and wondered which she could find another job or not.It was hard for her to
My aunt was out of work in 2009.At a (the) very beginning,she was afraid of being laughing (laughed) at by others.She was worried about (去掉) and wondered which (whether) she could find another job or not.It was hard for her to find a good job though (because) she didn't have special skills.But some time late (later),she was no longer afraid of being looked down (+upon ) .She manages (managed) to find a job as a waitress at a teahouse and now she is a manager through hard work,She does well in her job,from where (which) she can earn a lot of money.She have (has) set the laid-off workers a good example.

At a very beginning a--the
being laughing at by others laughing ----laughed
which she could find another job or not. which----whether
It was hard for her to find a good j...

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At a very beginning a--the
being laughing at by others laughing ----laughed
which she could find another job or not. which----whether
It was hard for her to find a good job though she didn't have special skills though---because
But some time late, she was no longer afraid of being looked down. some time late---later
She manages to find a job as a waitress at a teahouse and now she is a manager through hard work manages--- managed
She have set the laid-off workers a good example. set the laid-off workers ---set to
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the very beginning，being laughed，whether she could ，because she didn't have，以后的采纳后回复

At the very beginning(固定搭配)...being laughed(被动) she worried about(主动，一般过去式) whether she could(whether...or not 是否能够)
because she didn't(说明原因) some time later she managed(从后面可知，这应是过去式) Sh...

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At the very beginning(固定搭配)...being laughed(被动) she worried about(主动，一般过去式) whether she could(whether...or not 是否能够)
because she didn't(说明原因) some time later she managed(从后面可知，这应是过去式) She did well from which she can set the laid-off workers up a (树立一个例子)

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1. at a very beginning-------at the very beginning

2. being laughing------being laughed

3. worried about----worried

4. wondered which---wondered whether

   ...

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   1. at a very beginning-------at the very beginning

   2. being laughing------being laughed

   3. worried about----worried

   4. wondered which---wondered whether

   5. though--because

   6. late--later

   7. looked down--looked down upon

   8. manages----managed

   9. from where---from which

   10. have set---has set

        

        

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   at the very
   laughed
   about去掉
   which--whether
   though---because/as/for
   later
   looked down upon
   managed
   from which
   she has 应该就是这样

   a 改为the
   laughing改为laughed
   about删除
   which改为whether 改为
   though改为because
   late改为later
   looked down 加上on/upon
   manages改为managed
   from where改为from which
   have改为has

   1. a ->the:at the very beginning, 

   2. laughing->laughed 被动语态。

   3. 去掉at,固定搭配laugh at 嘲笑别人， be laughted by 被嘲笑

   4. which->if

   5. though...

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      1. a ->the:at the very beginning, 

      2. laughing->laughed 被动语态。

      3. 去掉at,固定搭配laugh at 嘲笑别人， be laughted by 被嘲笑

      4. which->if

      5. though-。because，原因从句

      6. late->later,不久之后

      7. afriad->afraiding, no longer doing
         

      8. manages->managed,过去式

      9. from where -> that
         

      10. have-》has.
          

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      My aunt was LOST HER JOB (out of work) in 2009. At THE (a) very beginning, she was afraid of being LAUGHED (laughing) at by others. She was worried about and wondered WHETHER (which) she could find an...

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      My aunt was LOST HER JOB (out of work) in 2009. At THE (a) very beginning, she was afraid of being LAUGHED (laughing) at by others. She was worried about and wondered WHETHER (which) she could find another job or not. It was hard for her to find a good job BECAUSE (though) she didn't have special skills.But some time late, she was no longer afraid of being looked down.She manages to find a job as a waitress at a teahouse and,THOUGH HARD WORK SHE(now) now is THE （a） manager( through hard work),She does well in her job,OF WHICH LEAD HER TO EARING (from whereshe can earn )a lot of money.She have set the laid-off workers a good example.

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