请高手帮我修改一下英语短文,我写的,水平有点差!关于“Every college student should take a computer course"的写作短文We are always use computer,for example,we are writing a word document,send message to colleague,always make

请高手帮我修改一下英语短文,我写的,水平有点差!关于“Every college student should take a computer course"的写作短文We are always use computer,for example,we are writing a word document,send message to colleague,always make
请高手帮我修改一下英语短文,我写的,水平有点差!
关于“Every college student should take a computer course"的写作短文
We are always use computer,for example,we are writing a word document,send message to colleague,always make PPT and EXCEL document.For we are job in the future,I think every college student should take a computer course.
不是太长的句子,如果可能的话希望可以给指点一下写作中的错误原因或者给点建议,

请高手帮我修改一下英语短文,我写的,水平有点差!关于“Every college student should take a computer course"的写作短文We are always use computer,for example,we are writing a word document,send message to colleague,always make
we are always using computer.for example,we are writing a word document,sending messages to colleagues,always making PPT and EXCEL document.if we can use computer,I think it an advantage for us to find a job.So I think every college student should take a computer course.

We always use computer, for example, when we are writing a word document, sending messages to colleagues, making PPT and EXCEL document. In the future, I think every college student should take a computer course.

We are always using computers. For example, We use computers when we are writing a word document, sending messages to a colleague, and making powerpoint and excel documents. For our jobs in the future, I think every college student should take a computer course.

非常好，改什么改？！

we are always using computer, for example, writing a word document, sending message to colleagues, making PPT and EXCEL document.
For we are job in the future是什么东西。
你写的东西主要是语法错误

我的意见有5条:
1.背课文和参考例文.每次考试后老师因该会把考试作文的范文抄出来,自己抄下来,能背下来最好,不行也要熟读.课文就不用说了,每篇至少要读5遍.
2.背单词.我这里说的单词不仅仅是指课本上的单词,要尽量加大自己的词汇量,所选单词的最好出处是平时所做的阅读和完形,每天背上几个自己感觉高级德词汇.有时,同一个意思,词用的好可以添不少彩(例如说大可以用big,large...

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我的意见有5条:
1.背课文和参考例文.每次考试后老师因该会把考试作文的范文抄出来,自己抄下来,能背下来最好,不行也要熟读.课文就不用说了,每篇至少要读5遍.
2.背单词.我这里说的单词不仅仅是指课本上的单词,要尽量加大自己的词汇量,所选单词的最好出处是平时所做的阅读和完形,每天背上几个自己感觉高级德词汇.有时,同一个意思,词用的好可以添不少彩(例如说大可以用big,large,huge,但很明显用后两个效果要好于第一个)
3.记住典型文章的格式.目前高考的英语作文以应用文为主,记住应用文的一些基本格式是保证分数的关键(例如写书信开头就可以来上一句I'm writing to tell you something about....).
4.记住一些经典句子.在英语作文里如果能用上一些英语谚语,那是非常处彩的(例如说一个有两面性的事情可以说:But as everyone knows,every coin has two sides.)d
5.语言要地道.英语作文的一大忌就是使用Chinglish,也就是中国式英语,有些意思如果表达不出来就换个说法,语言是活的,使用简单平庸的句子总好过错误德、滑稽德句子。
作文是个长期的工程，不是一朝一夕就能见成果的，一定要坚持下去。
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We are always [using] [computers][.] [For] example, we [always write] a word document, [send] [messages] to [the colleagues], [and make] PPT and EXCEL [documents]. For [our jobs] in the future, I thin...

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We are always [using] [computers][.] [For] example, we [always write] a word document, [send] [messages] to [the colleagues], [and make] PPT and EXCEL [documents]. For [our jobs] in the future, I think every college student should take a computer course.
请注意冠词的用法，如果名词前没有冠词的话，必须把可数名词换成复数形式
比如：use a computer;use computers;use the computer;use thecomputers
唯独不能说use computer
引用【冠词是一种虚词，是最典型的限定词，本身不能单独使用，只能附在一个名词上帮助说明名词的含义。是名词的一种标志。英语中的冠词有定冠词the和不定冠词a 、an两种：a用于辅音音素开头的词前，an用于元音音素开头的词前。不定冠词仅用在可数名词单数前。用来表示“—”的意思，但不强调数的观念，只说明名词为不特定者。定冠词则表示名词为特定者。表示“这，这些，那，那些”的意思，在可数名词单，复数前和不可数名词前都可以用。】
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