求人批阅雅思写作!C7T3WTask 1 1018-1040The bar chart below indicates information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with it in 1989.As is shown in the chart,the house prices took on a

求人批阅雅思写作!C7T3WTask 1 1018-1040The bar chart below indicates information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with it in 1989.As is shown in the chart,the house prices took on a
求人批阅雅思写作!
C7T3W
Task 1 1018-1040
The bar chart below indicates information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with it in 1989.
As is shown in the chart,the house prices took on a negative percentage change in the period of 1990 to 1995 with -5%,-7%,-8% in New York,Tokyo and London respectively.Also in this period,the house price in Madrid and Frankfurt increased by 2% and 3% respectively.
However,the change got a different appearance in the period of 5 years from 1996 to 2002,in which the percentage changes in all five countries except Tokyo are positive.The percentage change in Tokyo is -5%.And as can be seen in the chart,the percentage in London is striking comparatively and in New York,Madrid and Frankfurt,the percentage changes are modest comparatively.
All these statistics can be summarized as follows:in the period of 1990-1995,majority of the five countries have a negative change while in 1996-2002,majority of these have a positive change especially London.
请问这篇雅思task1写作可以拿多少分?

求人批阅雅思写作!C7T3WTask 1 1018-1040The bar chart below indicates information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with it in 1989.As is shown in the chart,the house prices took on a
6.5-7分左右吧
percentage, change, increase, decrease 出现的有点多, 试试paraphrasing:proportion, soar, plunge 等词.
Grammar也稍微有点单一.
And as can be seen in the chart, the percentage in London is striking comparatively and in New York, Madrid and Frankfurt, the percentage changes are modest comparatively. 这句话有点问题, 最好改一改.

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