英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my h

英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my h
英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误
I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting
,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my hand was born sense of achievement,how it feels like I'm a real cartoonist.
My father was a shipbuilding workers，now he is live with me.He was very strict
My mother is work in Japan.She is a wonderful cook.I like her dishes very much
I 'm very happiness in this family
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英语 帮我看下这篇作文有没有语法错误I am a very introverted girl.I like many things,for example,newspaper cutting,origami,but I like best is drawing,drawing cartoon,my favorite feeling is when there is a comic book character from my h
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我是一个高度个性内向者女孩。我喜欢很多东西，例如，报纸切，毛玻璃效果，然而我最喜欢的是钓鱼吸引，制图的漫画，我喜欢的觉得是日子有一个漫画书性格从我的手是熊成就感，如何它感觉我是一个真正漫画家。我的父亲一个圣赫勒拿岛

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- - 机器翻译的吧 好多错误.But what I like most is drawing cartoon.Then sense of achievent makes me feel like I am a real cartoonist when a comic character was born by my hand.My father was a shipbuilder.Now he is living with me and my mother works in Japan. I like my mother's cook very much . I am very happy in this family

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