女儿英语写的一篇文章,语法那些有没有错,i have a big problemi am worry aboat my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn well it.i almost don't know how i learn it .i don't want to my partants feel alarmed.But i am alleady try o

女儿英语写的一篇文章,语法那些有没有错,i have a big problemi am worry aboat my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn well it.i almost don't know how i learn it .i don't want to my partants feel alarmed.But i am alleady try o
女儿英语写的一篇文章,语法那些有没有错,
i have a big problem
i am worry aboat my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn well it.i almost don't know how i learn it .i don't want to my partants feel alarmed.But i am alleady try one's best.i don't know if school what will happen.i don't want to dropout.i learned math very easy before,But now think i learn math very terrible.i even find a tutor of math .But it is not be very effective ,oh ,my God,how i do it?Heaven help me!

女儿英语写的一篇文章,语法那些有没有错,i have a big problemi am worry aboat my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn well it.i almost don't know how i learn it .i don't want to my partants feel alarmed.But i am alleady try o
有一些语法错误和拼写错误.改一下吧.
I have a big problem
I am worried about my math,especially the "Resemble figures".
I find I can’t learn it well．I almost don’t know how to learn it．I don't want my parents to feel alarmed.But I have really tried my best.I don't know what will happen at school.I don't want to drop out.I learned math very easily before.But now I think it's very hard.I even find a tutor of math.But it is not very effective.Oh,my god!How can I do it God help me !

I have a big problem
I am worrying about my math of "Resemble figule",I find I can't learn it well.I almost don't know how I learned it .I don't want my partants feel worry.But I have already do...

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I have a big problem
I am worrying about my math of "Resemble figule",I find I can't learn it well.I almost don't know how I learned it .I don't want my partants feel worry.But I have already done my best.I don't know what will happen next.I don't want to drop out.I learned math very easily before,but now I think my math is very terrible.I even find a tutor of math .But it is not be very helpful ,oh ,my God,what could I do ? God save me !

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1.worry---worried.
2.learn well it---learn it well.
3.want to my partants feel alarmed---want my parents to feel alarmed.
4.i am alleady try one's best---i have already try my best.
5....

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1.worry---worried.
2.learn well it---learn it well.
3.want to my partants feel alarmed---want my parents to feel alarmed.
4.i am alleady try one's best---i have already try my best.
5.i don't know if school what will happen.---i don't know what will happen at school.
6..i don't want to dropout.---.i don't want dropout.
7.easy---easily.
8.think i learn math very terrible.---i think learning math very terriblely.
9.But it is not be very effective ---But it is not very effective.
10.how i do it---how do i do it.

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try one's best 直接就写 try my best
Heaven help me Heaven 应该是三单吧 help+s
But now think i learn math very terrible think应该不需要吧

I am worry about my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn it well.i don't even know how to learn it .i don't want to let my partants down. But I have tried my best.(i don't know if school w...

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I am worry about my math of "Resemble figule",i find i can't learn it well.i don't even know how to learn it .i don't want to let my partants down. But I have tried my best.(i don't know if school what will happen).i don't want to be a dropout.i learned math very easy before,But now i think its very hard for me to learn math.
i even find a tutor of math .But it is not very helpful。 Oh ,my God,how can i do it?
1、 大小写要注意，没句开头单词字母要大写，I 要一直大写。
2、 单词拼写
3、 固定句式的用法，比如：How can I make it? or How can I do it?
4、 意思表达清晰，中文意思要首先清晰，如问中.(i don't know if school what will happen)这句话根本就读不懂是什么意思，英语上语法有错误。（我猜测，如果要表达的意思是，“我不知到在学校会发生什么事情”的话， 那么大概要这样说好一些"I dont know what going to happen at school / I dont know what will happen at school"
大概上就是这样，问题不太大，一些小语法错误，但是小语法错误，正体现了基础还不够扎实，我改了一些，如上，可自己在通读一遍，改改大小写，标点等。

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