作业帮请您帮我看一下我的英语演讲稿有没有问题.There are hundreds of countries throughout the world,exist seven continents and eight oceans.Of course ,in the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty ,a situation of tripartite confrontation like the
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请您帮我看一下我的英语演讲稿有没有问题.There are hundreds of countries throughout the world,exist seven continents and eight oceans.Of course ,in the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty ,a situation of tripartite confrontation like the
请您帮我看一下我的英语演讲稿有没有问题.
There are hundreds of countries throughout the world,exist seven continents and eight oceans.Of course ,in the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty ,a situation of tripartite confrontation like the three legs of a tripod seriously destroyed the ancient China with destruction .Still less now over 200 countries stand in great numbers!So the actual situation of the world is really severe now.In spite of this ,trade creation and cultural transmission from place to place still very continual.For example,the Jiming Village in Yi Wu have gathered a large crowd of minority and foreign businessmen .It is also a genuine " a community of the U.N..Such colorful blend add a gorgeous splendor to the world .We also need those envoy who have nice belief ,in order to create a great number of new "the skill road",let everyone live together in peace.That's all.
在这个世界上存在着许多国家,有七大洲,八大洋.当然,东汉末年的三足鼎立局势尚且让全中国闹得不可开交,更何况是两百多个国家在世界上林立呢?所以,世界目前的形势的确严峻.可尽管如此,现在各国的贸易创造和文化交流仍十分频繁.比如,我国义乌市鸡鸣村,就聚集了众多少数民族和外国客商,是个名副其实的“联合国社区”.像这样多元化的融合,为世界增添了绚丽的色彩,我们也需要那些拥有美好信念的使者创造出一条条崭新的'丝绸之路'.
请您帮我看一下我的英语演讲稿有没有问题.There are hundreds of countries throughout the world,exist seven continents and eight oceans.Of course ,in the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty ,a situation of tripartite confrontation like the
第一个逗号后面那个exist应该是existing,其他的没什么语法错误.不过行文略中式,部分句子有些累赘,建议多用短句(毕竟是演讲稿).实在不行可以用定语从句,最好是非限制性的.