应聘外企,请看看我的英文简历有没有问题resumeDate Of Birth:July 7th,1983Gender:FemaleE-mail:----Cell Phone:----Professional Experence and Skills:03/2009-09/2009 Shanghai Pudong Development Bank Document ManagementPlace the documents

应聘外企,请看看我的英文简历有没有问题resumeDate Of Birth:July 7th,1983Gender:FemaleE-mail:----Cell Phone:----Professional Experence and Skills:03/2009-09/2009 Shanghai Pudong Development Bank Document ManagementPlace the documents
应聘外企,请看看我的英文简历有没有问题
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Date Of Birth:July 7th,1983
Gender:Female
E-mail:----
Cell Phone:----
Professional Experence and Skills:
03/2009-09/2009 Shanghai Pudong Development Bank Document Management
Place the documents in order,fill in the blanks with key words of
parts of them.Categories the documents by level 1 and level 2.
08/2007-08/2008 Tianjin Binjiang Shopping Center Act as a planner of Marketing
Make strategy of sales by the consumption cycle.By positioning,make to achive
business objectives in the whole shopping center.Attract Mainstream consumer groups
in different periods of time by all kinds of market activities.Put enough attention to promotions and
real profit.
12/2006-04/2007 Financial Department in Shell Company Tianjin Teller
Make statistical report,Costing,Document Management,cash flow statement,skillful in HSSE manament.
09/2006-11/2006 Lisan International Trade company Clark
Education:
09/2002-07/2006 B.A. in Finance , Nankai University
GPA: 77/100
Courses Taken Corporation Finance,Accounting,Micro-ecomonomy,Macro-economy,Invest in
Securities,International Finance,etc.
Honors:
Academic Achievment:Third Class Scholarship (Awarded to Top 15% students)
CET4: Passed; CET6:scores 401
Computerized Accounting Certificate,start to gain accounting qualification certificate
受累给看看有没有语法错误等等和提点意见
两位意见都很对，我很感谢 anymore

应聘外企,请看看我的英文简历有没有问题resumeDate Of Birth:July 7th,1983Gender:FemaleE-mail:----Cell Phone:----Professional Experence and Skills:03/2009-09/2009 Shanghai Pudong Development Bank Document ManagementPlace the documents
你这个六级分数.这是你的弱项.最好不写出来.只要你口头表达好就行了.简历就是

个人建议：
1.“Place the documents in order,fill in the blanks with key words of parts of them.”可以改成："Place the documents in order，analyze and fill the key words in the blank."
2.“09/2006-11/2006 Li...

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个人建议：
1.“Place the documents in order,fill in the blanks with key words of parts of them.”可以改成："Place the documents in order，analyze and fill the key words in the blank."
2.“09/2006-11/2006 Lisan International Trade company Clark”？如果要表达的是职员的意思的话，应该是“clerk”。
3.“By positioning,make to achive business objectives in the whole shopping center.”没有达意。

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