自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be reall

自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be reall
自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.
We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be really to come into being.

自己写了一个英语句子,请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没.或者有什么更好的表达方式.We live in a society that is filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired.Only when we are in home,the comfortable would be reall
①【从句】第一个定语从句（修饰society ）用对了.第二个定语从句（which makes us tired）如果是修饰cheat,那就没问题,如果是修饰competition and cheat ,makes就要改为make.
②【介词搭配】in home 应改为 at home ,注意介词的搭配.
③【词形转换】“the comfortable would be really to come into being” 中的comfortable 是 形容词,不能做主语,应改为其名词：comfort.
④【特殊句式】Only when 句型,主句应用部分倒装：Only when we are at home ,would the comfort really come into being.
总体句子结构不错.但是写句子是要注意：人称、时态、连词的使用、介词的搭配还有特殊句式等等.
希望能够帮到您!

in home
是一个错误用法，at home是正确的，表示“在家”
固定的词组搭配……

这句话这样说会更好： We live in a society which is filled with so much competition and fraud that we can easily feel tired. Only when we are at home can we have a sense of comfort.

in home应改为at home

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这句话这样说会更好： We live in a society which is filled with so much competition and fraud that we can easily feel tired. Only when we are at home can we have a sense of comfort.

in home应改为at home
only when放在句首主句要倒装
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每个人的英语习惯不一样，写的句子也不一样，你有几个语法错误
The society we lived filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired. Only when we at home, would the comfortable really came into being.
only+状语位于句首，句子...

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每个人的英语习惯不一样，写的句子也不一样，你有几个语法错误
The society we lived filled with competition and cheat,which makes us tired. Only when we at home, would the comfortable really came into being.
only+状语位于句首，句子要倒装：也就是象一般疑问句一样结构的。
only+状语从句位于句首，主语也要倒装，但从句不能倒装。
only+主语，不倒装。
如：
Only in this way can you find the truth.
Only when I saw her, did she tell me the truth.
Only the boy was in the classroom.

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we live in a society that is filled with competition and CHEATMENT which make us tired . only when we are at home , the comfort would be real to come into being .
你在形容词和名词或者副词的使用上把握似乎不太准确，应该是语感的问题...

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we live in a society that is filled with competition and CHEATMENT which make us tired . only when we are at home , the comfort would be real to come into being .
你在形容词和名词或者副词的使用上把握似乎不太准确，应该是语感的问题。建议多看英文原声电影，听英文歌等等，当然如果有条件的话，找英语国家的人大量对话，会对你有很大提升。

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“only when we are in home"中的”in"应该为“at”
其余的都对了
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