作业帮mary work at a bank.she begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.she stops working on five o'c接下去:ock in the afternoon.at five o'clock the bank closes.everybody goes to home.some people drive home.some people take the train.some peoples ta
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mary work at a bank.she begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.she stops working on five o'c接下去:ock in the afternoon.at five o'clock the bank closes.everybody goes to home.some people drive home.some people take the train.some peoples ta
mary work at a bank.she begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.she stops working on five o'c
接下去:ock in the afternoon.at five o'clock the bank closes.everybody goes to home.some people drive home.some people take the train.some peoples take the bus.mary walks home.she likes to walk.mary walks,and walks,or walks.mary lives eight milesfrom the bank.she walks for three hour.at eight o'clock in the evening,mary is home.he eats dinner.at ten o'clock she goes to the bed.mary is tired.she is eighty-two year old.短文中有十处错的,请指出来并改正.
mary work at a bank.she begin working at eight o'clock in the morning.she stops working on five o'c接下去:ock in the afternoon.at five o'clock the bank closes.everybody goes to home.some people drive home.some people take the train.some peoples ta
work ----works
begin----begins
on five o'clock--------at five o'clock
goes to home-----goes home
some peoples ----- some people
or walks---and walks
hour---hours
he eat---she eats
goes to the bed--goes to bed
year ---years
work-works
working-to work
home前不用介词,to去掉
peoples-去掉s
hour-hours
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其实楼上完全正确。