英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗Long long time ago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they have just a son.They are not awere of

英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗Long long time ago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they have just a son.They are not awere of
英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗
Long long time ago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they have just a son.They are not awere of the babe will be a trublemaker.in fact,that babe is me.
I am use to cut school with my diehard followers playing compurter game when i am in junior middle school.My parent always scolds me,disrelish me study is bad.
now,I am nineteen.I found my hobby.I don't care what they say.I have been the only constant desire.
准备明年中下旬出国 但是英语太烂
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英语作文 第一次写 有任何错请大家找出来 然后帮我改正 还要写语法错在哪好吗Long long time ago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they have just a son.They are not awere of
错误多了就改不起了：
A long,long time ago,...

A Long long time ago ,a baby came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy，because they just had a son.They are not aware of whether the baby will be a troublemaker. In fact,that ...

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A Long long time ago ,a baby came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy，because they just had a son.They are not aware of whether the baby will be a troublemaker. In fact,that baby is me.
I used to cut school with my diehard followers. I often played compurter games when i were in junior middle school.My parent always scolded me, and hoped me studywould be better. now,I am nineteen.I found my hobby.I don't care what they say. I have the only constant desire.
- -从头开始来吧 大家帮帮忙吧 多给点建议
从基础词汇和句法来学习,不是直接生搬词汇，慢慢进步
冰冻三尺非一日之寒，要想英语真正有进步，也得坚持下去 ，祝你进步

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A long,long time ago. A baby came into the world,a young man and a young women were very happy，because they have a son.They are not aware of the fact that the baby will be a troublemaker. In fact,that...

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A long,long time ago. A baby came into the world,a young man and a young women were very happy，because they have a son.They are not aware of the fact that the baby will be a troublemaker. In fact,that baby is me.
I used to cut school with my diehard followers， playing computer games when I am in junior middle school. My parents would always scold me, disrelish me study is bad.
Now,I am nineteen. I found my hobby,I don't care what they say. I have been the only constant desire.
我只是纠正一些语法错误。你说的 junior middle schoool 是是错误的，因为它要么 junior high（7年级至9年级）,或 middle school（5级到9级）。或至少在加拿大是这样的，所以我没有改，因为我不知道你在中国是如何使用。

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Long longago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they had just a son.They were not awere of the babe would be a trublemaker.in fact,that babe is me.
I...

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Long longago ,A babe came into the world.A young man and a young women were very happy.Because they had just a son.They were not awere of the babe would be a trublemaker.in fact,that babe is me.
I used to cut school with my diehard followers to play compurter game when i was in junior middle school.My parent always scolded me, My study was bad.
now,I am nineteen.I found my hobby.I don't care what they say.

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