英语病句修改This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.This makes me even

英语病句修改This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.This makes me even
英语病句修改
This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.
Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.
For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.
This makes me even more do not know what course to follow.
Day by day,time passed by
The national day is coming
While in study,consider their own fate.
Really tangled very confused.
However,learning is always the most important thing,
POSTER teacher let me endless frustration.
But surprisingly,I treat it carefully.
We used two studies up writing my SOCIAL POSTER and the topic was CHINESE IDENTITY.
all of the social class are full of ss posters
I suddenly found our school is so beautiful
Even the cafeteria,the play ground
The sky on our school
The way to school
In this way,life in an orderly manner over a month.
A month of thought and sentiment.
A month of growing and experiences.
A month of tangled and suffering.
Finally I decided to stay here.
Because,I can not live without the people here who are enthusiasm and friendly.I can not live without my good friends and teachers here.
Even though I know there are going to be a lot of
Even though I knew right away there will be a lot of people throwing us left.
Because I know the future we will together face more difficulties and challenges.
Our future will be far apart cheering each other.
We still have a lot of good agreement and plans.
We will definitely live up to.
Because we have now done the first step:
Even though far apart and then do not forget themselves to each other also.
These wonderful vision and goals are our motivation.
We are made to pay all the sacrifice and are aimed at our common ideals and happiness.
And everyone here appreciates the hardships and happiness.
I know that our school will become more beautiful,
The sky will become more blue.
几乎每句话都是病句、有哪位能帮忙改一下?

英语病句修改This is the school after the first time that I sincerely love everything here.Love the people here,love the warm and friendly here.For the first time began to recall with nostalgia the school has not yet completed.This makes me even
第一句,the 改为a
第二句,缺主语,句首加I
第三句,recall改为overcome,the school前面加when
第五句,Day after day and time passed by,the National day is coming.
While studying,（in study是在书房的意思,study在这里就变成名称了,但是我觉得你是学习中的意思）they consider their own fate,the feeling is really tangled and very confused.
However,study is always the most important thing,
【POSTER teacher let me endless frustration.】(这句我不知道你想表达什么意思）
But surprised,I treat it carefully.
We used two hours to studies up in writing my SOCIAL POSTER and the topic was Chinese Identity.
all of the social classes are full of ss posters
I suddenly found my school is so beautiful,even the cafeteria,the play ground,the sky above our school,The way to school
In this way(in this way是这样的意思,你这里的way是路还是泛指?）,life in an orderly manner over a month.
A month of thought and sentiment.
A month of growing and experiences.
A month of tangled and suffering.
Finally I decided to stay here.
Because I can not live without the people here who are enthusiasm and friendly.I can not live without my good friends and teachers here.
Even though I know there are going to be a lot of _______
Even though I knew there will be a lot of people leave us right away .
Because I know we will together face more difficulties and challenges in the future .
Our future will be far apart cheering for each other.
We still have a lot of good agreements(goals) and plans.
We will definitely live up to.
Because we have now done the first step:
Even though far apart,they do not forget themselves to each other.
These wonderful visions and goals are our motivation.
We are ready to pay all the sacrifice and aiming at our common faiths and happiness.
And everyone here appreciates the hardships and happiness.
I know that our school will become more beautiful,the sky will be more blue.

第一句：把the变成a
第二句：再句首加I