这是我写的一篇英语作文,Our school lifeI think our school life is colorful and wonderful.Because we have many actinties.You see,from Monday to Friday,there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.I was one of them.Th

这是我写的一篇英语作文,Our school lifeI think our school life is colorful and wonderful.Because we have many actinties.You see,from Monday to Friday,there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.I was one of them.Th
这是我写的一篇英语作文,
Our school life
I think our school life is colorful and wonderful.Because we have many actinties.You see,from Monday to Friday,there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.I was one of them.There are many other sports,too.I do believe life comes from sports.So I thank the school person in change of the sport item.I not only like our school but also the school life!

这是我写的一篇英语作文,Our school lifeI think our school life is colorful and wonderful.Because we have many actinties.You see,from Monday to Friday,there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.I was one of them.Th
Our school life
I think our school life is colorful and wonderful.Because we have many activities.We can play basketball ,volleyball,and badminton in the playground after school .I like playing basketball best.I always practise playing basketball with my friends on Friday afternoon.There are many other activities,too.I do believe that life comes from sports.So I thank the teachers for the change of the sport item.My friends and I often help with each other ,and the teachers are kind to us.I really enjoy the school life and I love my school!
给你改了很多呵

首先BECAUSE应和前面是一个句,把because前的句号改为逗号。把i was ...那句删去因为那个句子在句中并没有作用。THERE。。。那句最好改为THERE ARE AISO OTHER。。。最后一句句式错了改为Not only do I like our school ......表达上完整了，但缺少例子，给人的感觉不好。...

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首先BECAUSE应和前面是一个句,把because前的句号改为逗号。把i was ...那句删去因为那个句子在句中并没有作用。THERE。。。那句最好改为THERE ARE AISO OTHER。。。最后一句句式错了改为Not only do I like our school ......表达上完整了，但缺少例子，给人的感觉不好。

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Our school life
Our school life is colorful and wonderful.We have many activities in our school.From Monday to Friday,many students play basketball and soccer on the playground after class.I like ...

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Our school life
Our school life is colorful and wonderful.We have many activities in our school.From Monday to Friday,many students play basketball and soccer on the playground after class.I like sports very much. I think sports is one of the important parts of our life.I am not only like our school but also the school life!
单词拼错哦，检查一下activities,然后是语法的前后统一，你想刚才还说there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.为什么到了后面用I was one of them呢？
要说也是 I am one of them.
So I thank the school person in change of the sport item.这句话不要比较好，我没看懂= =
然后是最后一句，语法错误，be动词牢记在心呀！！
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