英语改错 要有原因six years before,i held four jobs in all.i worked full-time as magazine editor in evening after works i would go to a training school to teach children chinese on saturdays ,i worked a s a babysitter for my neighbor whom was
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![英语改错 要有原因six years before,i held four jobs in all.i worked full-time as magazine editor in evening after works i would go to a training school to teach children chinese on saturdays ,i worked a s a babysitter for my neighbor whom was](/uploads/image/z/4821684-60-4.jpg?t=%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E6%94%B9%E9%94%99+%E8%A6%81%E6%9C%89%E5%8E%9F%E5%9B%A0six+years+before%2Ci+held+four+jobs+in+all.i+worked+full-time+as+magazine+editor+in+evening+after+works+i+would+go+to+a+training+school+to+teach+children+chinese+on+saturdays+%2Ci+worked+a+s+a+babysitter+for+my+neighbor+whom+was)
英语改错 要有原因six years before,i held four jobs in all.i worked full-time as magazine editor in evening after works i would go to a training school to teach children chinese on saturdays ,i worked a s a babysitter for my neighbor whom was
英语改错 要有原因
six years before,i held four jobs in all.i worked full-time as magazine editor in evening after works i would go to a training school to teach children chinese on saturdays ,i worked a s a babysitter for my neighbor whom was a single father .on sundays ,i served for customers in a local bar .in a word i do what i could do to earn enough money to buy a house i always felt very tiring .one day ,i got serious ill after working so hard for a long time .lie in bed,i realize that my health mattered more than owning a house ,so i gave in all my part-time job
英语改错 要有原因six years before,i held four jobs in all.i worked full-time as magazine editor in evening after works i would go to a training school to teach children chinese on saturdays ,i worked a s a babysitter for my neighbor whom was
第一行:
1.magazine前加上a.
因为editor为可数名词单数,其前必须用不定冠词表示泛指类别.
2.in evening--in the evening (in the evening 固定短语,“在晚上”)
3.works--work (work为不可数名词,没有复数形式的.)
第三行:
4.whom--who (关系代词在定从中作主语,故用who)
5.去掉for (因为serve是及物动词,后面直接跟宾语,不需要介词的.)
第四行:
6.第一个do--did (这儿的do应是过去行为,故用过去式did)
7.去掉第二个do (在I did what I could这样的句型中,因为前面有实义动词do的某种形式,
所以could后不能再用do了.)
8.tiring--tired (指人“感到累的”用tired;指物“令人疲劳的”用tiring)
第五行:
9.serious--seriously (修饰形容词ill作状语,故用副词seriously)
10.lie--lying (现在分词作伴随状语)
11.realize--realized ( 指当时躺在床上时“意识到”,故应用过去式.)
第六行:
12.gave in--gave up ( give in 投降,让步; give up 放弃)
13.job--jobs (job是可数名词,前面有all修饰时,应用复数形式jobs.)