"Dad." Finally ,I call him father.This is the stepfather into our lives four years later ,I first time called him .Since the day that i was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not said for me,too.I was sad to think that my father

"Dad." Finally ,I call him father.This is the stepfather into our lives four years later ,I first time called him .Since the day that i was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not said for me,too.I was sad to think that my father
"Dad." Finally ,I call him father.This is the stepfather into our lives four years later ,I first time called him .
Since the day that i was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not said for me,too.I was sad to think that my father left,I would never felt the fatherly love.But appearance of my stepfather,clean up doubt and worries of my heart.
In the summer vacation of sixth grade ,stepfather came to my home from Los Angeles.At that time,I didn’t knew why do I have a stepfather,and why I have never seen my biological father.I though we can not became a family.I always think that I only have a father,even though we have never met,and he already left me and my mother.

"Dad." Finally ,I call him father.This is the stepfather into our lives four years later ,I first time called him .Since the day that i was born,I have never seen my biological father.Mother would not said for me,too.I was sad to think that my father
第一行 This is the first time I call him father after he has lived with us for four year.
第三行 主语I 改成大写的,有一个是小写；
My mother would not say anything about him,too.
第四行 Whenever thought of my father's left,I was sad and felt that I would never obtain the love from him.
第四行及第五行那句话 But the appearance of my stepfather have cleaned up all the doubt and worries that stucked in my heart.
第六行In summer vacation of my sixth grade,
第七行 I didn't know why I had a step father,.I thought.
第八行 become,后面的a father改成one father

The picture symbolically illustrated the different ratio between the number of fish and fishing-boats. In the first picture, there were a large number of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. In the...

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The picture symbolically illustrated the different ratio between the number of fish and fishing-boats. In the first picture, there were a large number of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. In the second picture, on the contrary, there are a lot of fishing-boats scrambling one fish in 1995. And the painter named them A Brief History of World Commercial Fishing.
We can easily tell that the cartoonist’s purpose is to show us that with the development of the commercial fishing the number of the fish have severely decreased over the last century. But why ocean resources are becoming less and less? The answer is complicated. For my opinion, one is the technology abled human to explore every parts of the ocean, so that people could get everything in the sea.The other reason is that human becomes more greedy.
If we want to resolve these problems we are facing, there are many aspects should be considered. First, the government should pay attention to fishing business and refine the laws to effectively punish the offenders. Second, as common people, we should learn and do more to protect the environment of oceans and keep the biological balance of the oceans.Then, we will have a bright future.
PS.作者应该多开阔一下思路。这个是主要问题。如果你把这个作文翻译成中文也读不通。

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The picture symbolically illustrated the different ratio between the number of fish and fishing-boats. In the first picture, there were a large number of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. In the...

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The picture symbolically illustrated the different ratio between the number of fish and fishing-boats. In the first picture, there were a large number of fish and only one fishing-boat in 1900. In the second picture, on the contrary, there are a lot of fishing-boats scrambling one fish in 1995. And the painter named them A Brief History of World Commercial Fishing.
We can easily tell that the cartoonist’s purpose is to show us that with the development of the commercial fishing the number of the fish have severely decreased over the last century. But why ocean resources are becoming less and less? The answer is complicated. For my opinion, one is the technology abled human to explore every parts of the ocean, so that people could get everything in the sea.The other reason is that human becomes more greedy.
If we want to resolve these problems we are facing, there are many aspects should be considered. First, the government should pay attention to fishing business and refine the laws to effectively punish the offenders. Second, as common people, we should learn and do more to protect the environment of oceans and keep the biological balance of the oceans.Then, we will have a bright future.
PS.作者应该多开阔一下思路。这个是主要问题。如果你把这个作文翻译成中文也读不通。

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"Dad. " Finally , I call him father. It is the first time that I has accepted him in four years.
Since I was born, I have never seen my biological father.Mother never talked about that with me,too...

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"Dad. " Finally , I call him father. It is the first time that I has accepted him in four years.
Since I was born, I have never seen my biological father.Mother never talked about that with me,too.I was sad to think that my father left, I would never get love from father.But the appearance of my stepfather changed it.
In the summer vacation of the sixth grade, my stepfather came to my home from Los Angeles. At that time, I didn’t know why I have a stepfather and why I have never seen my biological father.I thought we can not became families. I always think that I only have a father, even though we have never met, and he has already left me and my mother.

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