三道英语改错题以下3道改错题,每道题有4处错误.如何修改,请大家指教.1.The get-together was drawing near day by day.Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work.The reservation of a table for eight p

三道英语改错题以下3道改错题,每道题有4处错误.如何修改,请大家指教.1.The get-together was drawing near day by day.Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work.The reservation of a table for eight p
三道英语改错题
以下3道改错题,每道题有4处错误.如何修改,请大家指教.
1.The get-together was drawing near day by day.Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work.The reservation of a table for eight people in the restaurant,the fruits for the party,the present for Mr.Shi,the games we could play.The present,we all agreed to buy an electric fan the hot weather.
2.Recruitment of new students lasted for three weeks.The students were from 31 provinces and.It was for the first time that UIBE recruited new students from Macao.When interviewing the new student from Macao,the tall and slim girl said that she received warm welcome when she came to the university.She told me that she felt the campus was big and beautiful.When being asked why she was enrolled for a university in mainland China,she answered that she wanted to be independent and learn knowledge of trade and management,UIBE was famous for those.
3.But the plan was cancelled by Liuyang,saying that she was old enough to live alone.“To me,campus life is mysterious and challengeable.I like my room mate,really.All of us come from different part with different thoughts,I have already learned a lot from others.Besides,the dining room is good,and we will have new dorm in November.”

三道英语改错题以下3道改错题,每道题有4处错误.如何修改,请大家指教.1.The get-together was drawing near day by day.Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare work.The reservation of a table for eight p
1.The get-together was drawing near (改为nearly)day by day.Our classmates who were in charge of it were busy with the prepare(改为preparatory) work.The reservation of a table for eight people in the restaurant,the fruits(改为fruit) for the party,the present for Mr.Shi,the games we could play.The present,we all agreed to buy an electric fan (加for)the hot weather.
2.(加上The)Recruitment of new students lasted for three weeks.The students were from 31 provinces and.It was for the first time that UIBE recruited new students from Macao.When interviewing the new student from Macao,the tall and slim girl said that she received warm welcome when she came to the university.She told me that she felt the campus was（去掉was) big and beautiful.When being asked why she was enrolled for a university in (加上the)mainland (加上of)China,she answered that she wanted to be independent and learn knowledge of trade and management,UIBE was famous for those.
3.But the plan was cancelled by Liuyang(改为Liu Yang),saying that she was old enough to live alone.“To me,campus life is mysterious and challengeable.I like my room mate,really.(All of us 把All of us改为We) come from different part with different thoughts,I have already learned a lot from others.Besides,the dining room is good,and we will have new dorm(dorms) in (改为this)November.”

1\near---nearly
buy an electric fan (for) the hot weather.
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