哪位英语好的好心人能帮我修改下作文.在此万分感激.主要是看下语法句型上的错误.题目是Should college students own cars?1现在有不少大学生自己开车上学2对这种行为人们看法不一3在我看来Accrodi

哪位英语好的好心人能帮我修改下作文.在此万分感激.主要是看下语法句型上的错误.题目是Should college students own cars?1现在有不少大学生自己开车上学2对这种行为人们看法不一3在我看来Accrodi
哪位英语好的好心人能帮我修改下作文.在此万分感激.主要是看下语法句型上的错误.
题目是Should college students own cars?
1现在有不少大学生自己开车上学
2对这种行为人们看法不一
3在我看来
Accroding to a recent survey,up to 25% of college student have own cars to go to universitr.It has been prevailing among students in recent years.
There is no consensus among the people as to whether we should go to school by driving own cars.Some people hold idea that college students have own cars is unquestionable benefical to them.As far as they concerned,students drive their cars go to school which can save their time.They can spend more time on their studing and prictice .On the other hand,others may have a quite different view.According to them,students have own cars which can also do much harm.For example,students will campare with others band of cars.It will give rise side effects.Moreover ,as a students ,they may be lack of safety awareness.It is very dangerous for college students.
In my view,few men will deny that drive cars by students has benefits and problems.But we should do is to try our best to make matters better and bypass its side effects.And we must realized that with the development cities,students idea are very different past time .

哪位英语好的好心人能帮我修改下作文.在此万分感激.主要是看下语法句型上的错误.题目是Should college students own cars?1现在有不少大学生自己开车上学2对这种行为人们看法不一3在我看来Accrodi
Accroding to a recent survey,up to 25% of college student have own cars to go to university.It has been prevailing among students in recent years.
There is no consensus among (the 去掉) people as to whether we should go to school by (driving 多余,去掉) (our) own cars.
Some people hold (the) idea that college students have own cars is unquestionable (benefical 拼错了,beneficial) to them.
college students have own cars is unquestionable beneficial有语法错误,出现了两个动词have,go,建议改为：it is unquestionable beneficial for college students to have their own cars.
As far as they (concerned,ed去掉),students drive their cars go to school which can save their time.
有语法错误,出现了两个动词drive,go.建议改为：As far as they concern, for students going to school by car can save their time.
They can spend more time on their studing(改成study) and prictice(拼错了) .On the other hand（既然用了on the other hand,那上文中应出现on one hand才对呀,你这用的显得很突兀,建议改成However）,others may have a quite different view.
According to them,students have own cars which can also do much harm.
你这句话想表达的观点是学生有自己的车会造成伤害,然后你用which指代了students have own cars,这种用法是不正确的,which只能指代主语、宾语,不能指代整个句子.建议改为：It can also do much harm to students who have their own cars.
For example,students will campare with others (in) (the) band of cars.
It will give rise side effects.这句话啥意思?
Moreover , as a （students,s去掉） ,they may be lack of safety awareness.It is very dangerous for college students.
In my view,few men will deny that drive cars by students has （both）benefits and problems.
感觉你是按照中文思维“学生开车有利有弊”写的这句话,虽无语法错误,但这样这样不好.建议改为"It has both benefits and problems for students to drive their own car.
But (what) we should do is to try our best to make matters better and bypass its side effects. And we must realized(ed去掉) that with the development cities,students idea are very different past time .
世上像我这么有爱心的人哪里找,5个金币给你写这么多.好好努力吧,多看看语法书.