Mark Twain was an American writer.One day he went to a city by train.He wanted to see one of his friends there.He was a very busy man.He usually forgot something.When he was in the train,the conductor asked him for his ticket.Mark Twain looked for th

Mark Twain was an American writer.One day he went to a city by train.He wanted to see one of his friends there.He was a very busy man.He usually forgot something.When he was in the train,the conductor asked him for his ticket.Mark Twain looked for th
Mark Twain was an American writer.One day he went to a city by train.He wanted to see one of his friends there.He was a very busy man.He usually forgot something.
When he was in the train,the conductor asked him for his ticket.Mark Twain looked for the ticket here and there,but he couldn't find it.The conductor knew Mark Twain.She said,"Show me your ticket on your way back.And if you can't find it,it doesn't matter."
"Oh,but it does."said Mark Twain."I must find the ticket.If I can't find it,how can I know where I'm going?"
帮忙把较难懂的语法结构变简单点,使原意不变,改正里面的语法错误.控制在100词之内,再译出汉语.

Mark Twain was an American writer.One day he went to a city by train.He wanted to see one of his friends there.He was a very busy man.He usually forgot something.When he was in the train,the conductor asked him for his ticket.Mark Twain looked for th
这是一个很初级的原版,你弄的那个基本上没啥错误,但有一点需要注意,"Oh,but it does."does后面一定要用逗号.
还有那位兄台把conductor翻译为列车长很不合适.
Mark Twain（马克·吐温）was an American writer（作家）.One day he went to a city by train.He wanted to see one of his friends there.He was a very busy man.He usually forgot something.
When he was in the train,the conductor（列车员） asked him for his ticket.Mark Twain looked for the ticket here and there,but he couldn't find it.The conductor knew Mark Twain.She said,“Show me your ticket on your way back.And if （如果）you can't find it,it doesn't matter.”
“Oh,but it does,”said Mark Twain.“I must find the ticket.If I can't find it,how can I know where I'm going?”
其中一些七年级不很熟的词汇
American 美国
went go的过去式
city 城市
usually 经常
forget 忘记
conductor 列车员
knew know的过去式,认识、知道
matter 事情、问题
could can的过去式
look for 找、寻找
ticket 车票
if 如果
must 必须
翻译
马克吐温是一个美国作家.
一天,他乘坐火车到某市.
他要拜访那儿的一个朋友.
他是个大忙人,常常会忘记一些事情.
当他上了火车后,列车员要查一下他的车票.
可是马克吐温到处找车票,却找不到.
这时,列车员认出了马克吐温.
她说:“当你返程的时,再给我看你的票也行.如果你实在找不到,也没关系.”
“不,有关系,”马克吐温说：“我必须找到票,如果找不到,我怎么知道应该在哪里下车呀!"
我很认真的把你布置的任务完成了.

Mark Twain 是一个美国的作家,有一天他坐火车到一个城市.他想探望那里的一个朋友.他是一个大忙人.他经常忘记事情.
当他在火车里,列车员问他拿票.Mark Twain 东找西找他的票,但是他找不到它.列车员认识Mark Twain ,她说:你回来的时候再给票我看吧,你不用再找了,这没关系.
噢,这有关系!Mark Twain 说,我必须找到那张票,如果我找不到,我怎么知道我...

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Mark Twain 是一个美国的作家,有一天他坐火车到一个城市.他想探望那里的一个朋友.他是一个大忙人.他经常忘记事情.
当他在火车里,列车员问他拿票.Mark Twain 东找西找他的票,但是他找不到它.列车员认识Mark Twain ,她说:你回来的时候再给票我看吧,你不用再找了,这没关系.
噢,这有关系!Mark Twain 说,我必须找到那张票,如果我找不到,我怎么知道我要去哪里?
我翻译得很辛苦叻``
你看着办吧..
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Mark Twain was an American writer. One day he went to a city by train. He wanted to see one of his friends there. He was a very busy man. He usually forgot something.
When he was in the train, th...

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Mark Twain was an American writer. One day he went to a city by train. He wanted to see one of his friends there. He was a very busy man. He usually forgot something.
When he was in the train, the conductor asked him for his ticket. Mark Twain looked for the ticket here and there, but he couldn't find it. The conductor knew Mark Twain. She said, "Show me your ticket on your way back. And if you can't find it, it doesn't matter."
"Oh, but it does."said Mark Twain. "I must find the ticket. If I can't find it, how can I know where I'm going?"
这个应该是英文原版的最简单的版本了，再修改就是画蛇添足了。我就直接翻译吧。
马克吐温是美国作家。一天他坐火车去一个城市。他想去看哪儿的一个朋友。他是一个很忙的人。他经常忘记一些事情。
当他在车上，列车长向他查票。马克吐温搜遍了他的口袋，但是找不到。列车长认识马克吐温，她说：“在你回来的时候给我看票吧，如果真的找不到，也不要紧。”“哦，但是要紧，”马克吐温说，“我必须找到票，如果找不到，我怎么知道我要去哪儿啊？”

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最简单了已经。。。。。。