【200分汉译英】小诗歌 — “希望明天”希望明天今天是我上班的最后一天了,或许,有很多的遗憾,有很多的失落,有很多的收获,或许.一切都该结束了,一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的,新的世界

【200分汉译英】小诗歌 — “希望明天”希望明天今天是我上班的最后一天了,或许,有很多的遗憾,有很多的失落,有很多的收获,或许.一切都该结束了,一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的,新的世界
【200分汉译英】小诗歌 — “希望明天”
希望明天
今天是我上班的最后一天了,
或许,
有很多的遗憾,
有很多的失落,
有很多的收获,
或许.
一切都该结束了,
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的,
新的世界还在明天,
一定的.
就象阳光初照的时候,
总是回避,
不想拉开百叶窗,
前景总是模糊,
一定的!
只要心中永远阳光,
向往光明,
向前一步,
你会发现,
前方的世界更是精彩,
一定的!
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说明：此小诗歌作于2005年12月31日,当时是我当班最后一天,很多感想就写下了这篇文章.

【200分汉译英】小诗歌 — “希望明天”希望明天今天是我上班的最后一天了,或许,有很多的遗憾,有很多的失落,有很多的收获,或许.一切都该结束了,一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的,新的世界
希望明天 A New Tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了,
my last day at this position
或许,
perhaps
有很多的遗憾,
regreted a lot
有很多的失落,
lost a lot
有很多的收获,
gained a lot
或许.
perhaps
一切都该结束了,
everything has an end
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的,
like an article that needs a fullstop
新的世界还在明天,
tomorrow is completely new
一定的.
I am sure...
就象阳光初照的时候,
When sunshine blazes
总是回避,
I am always a liitle worried
不想拉开百叶窗,
would not like to open the shutter
前景总是模糊,
thus my future is vague
一定的!
I am sure!
只要心中永远阳光,
So long as your heart is full of sunshine
向往光明,
So long as you are yearn for the rosiness
向前一步,
So long as you go forward even a step
你会发现,
You will find
前方的世界更是精彩,
Tomorrow is much more wonderful
一定的!
I am sure!
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Today, my last day of work ,
Perhaps,
A lot of regret,
A lot of loss,
A lot of benefts,
Perhaps...
All to end,
An article is always with perfect ending ,
Tomorrow, ant...

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Today, my last day of work ,
Perhaps,
A lot of regret,
A lot of loss,
A lot of benefts,
Perhaps...
All to end,
An article is always with perfect ending ,
Tomorrow, anthor world,
Certainly...
Just like the sunshine at early time,
Usually avoiding,
Unwilling to open the blinds,
The prospects are blurred,
Certainly!
Only with sunshine in your mind,
Yearn bright,
Step forward,
You'll find
The world ahead is more wonderful
Certainly!
水平有限，可能不太好~

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Tomorrow ：I'm Blessing
today,it's the last day--working of this
today , perhaps
many regrettably
many lost
and many harvest
perhaps ...
It's a time
of the end of al...

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Tomorrow ：I'm Blessing
today,it's the last day--working of this
today , perhaps
many regrettably
many lost
and many harvest
perhaps ...
It's a time
of the end of all things
every store at the end belong a end
tomorrow is a new world
certainly
every time
when the sunsine lighted in room
i was Hiding
i keeping the closed of blinds
it's Vaguely
certainly
as long as the sunsine in my heart
along suanshine
step forward
you are found
a world of more brilliant
certainly

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tomorrow hope
my last day of work is Today.
parhaps,
Have lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of benefits,
Perhaps ...
All here end.
An essay on the painting ...

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tomorrow hope
my last day of work is Today.
parhaps,
Have lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of benefits,
Perhaps ...
All here end.
An essay on the painting to a perfect ending.
That's a new world tomorrow,
certainly ...
when the sunsine lighted in room ,
Always evasive,
Not opened blinds,
Prospects are always blurred,
Certainly!
As long as the sunsine in my heart
along suanshine
step forward
you are found
a world of more brilliant
certainly
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我把第一篇的语法错误和韵脚修改了一下,如果要朗诵的话应该没问题.

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Tomorrow hope
my last day of working today.
parhaps,
lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of harvest,
Perhaps ...
everything over.
An essay on the painting to a...

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Tomorrow hope
my last day of working today.
parhaps,
lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of harvest,
Perhaps ...
everything over.
An essay on the painting to a perfect ending.
That's a new world tomorrow,
certainly ...
when the sunsine lighted in room ,
Always evasive,
Not opened blinds,
Prospects are always blurred,
Certainly!
As long as the sunsine in my heart
along suanshine
step forward
you are found
a world of more brilliant
certainly

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tomorrow hope
my last day of work is Today.
parhaps,
Have lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of benefits,
Perhaps ...
All here end.
An essay on the painting to...

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tomorrow hope
my last day of work is Today.
parhaps,
Have lots of regrets,
lots of loss,
lots of benefits,
Perhaps ...
All here end.
An essay on the painting to a perfect ending.
That's a new world tomorrow,
certainly ...
when the sunsine lighted in room ,
Always evasive,
Not opened blinds,
Prospects are always blurred,
Certainly!
As long as the sunsine in my heart
along suanshine
step forward
you are found
a world of more brilliant
certainly

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I hope that tomorrow
Today is my last day of work.
Perhaps,
Have a lot of regrets,
A lot of loss,
There are many benefits,
Perhaps ...
All end here.
An article ...

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I hope that tomorrow
Today is my last day of work.
Perhaps,
Have a lot of regrets,
A lot of loss,
There are many benefits,
Perhaps ...
All end here.
An article on the painting to a perfect ending.
Is the new world tomorrow,
Certain ...
As early as the sunshine,
Always evasive,
Not opened blinds,
Prospects are always blurred,
Certainly!
As long as the hearts of sunshine
Who yearned for a bright future.
Step forward.
You will find that
In front of the world is wonderful.
Certainly!

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Hope tomorrow Today was I goes to work last day, Perhaps, Has very many regrets, Has very many losing, Is rewarded, Perhaps...... All should finish, An article must mark the perfect period, New world ...

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Hope tomorrow Today was I goes to work last day, Perhaps, Has very many regrets, Has very many losing, Is rewarded, Perhaps...... All should finish, An article must mark the perfect period, New world also in tomorrow, Certain...... Time illuminates which on likely the beginning of thesunlight, Always avoids, Does not want to pull open the louver, The prospect is always fuzzy, Certain! So long as in heart forever sunlight, Yearns for the light, To preceding step, You can discover, The front world is splendid, Certain! 当班最后一天很有意义.

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A Hope For Tomorrow
Today, my last workday,
There might be left
full regret
great loss
or rich harvest
Perhaps there are
Everything supposed to be over
Like a perfec...

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A Hope For Tomorrow
Today, my last workday,
There might be left
full regret
great loss
or rich harvest
Perhaps there are
Everything supposed to be over
Like a perfect end required by an essay
The new world belong to tomorrow
Surely it is
As the sun bursts into the room就象阳光初照的时候，
First I hide 总是回避，
With the least wish to put up the shutter
And the future always being obscure
Surely it is
Only with a sunny heart
longing for the brightness
Move one more step forward
And you will find
A more wonderful world waiting for you
Surely you will

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希望明天 i hope that tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is my last workday,
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many re...

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希望明天 i hope that tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is my last workday,
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe......
一切都该结束了， everything should be over,
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的， an essay always need a perfect end,
新的世界还在明天， the new world belongs to tomorrow,
一定的...... surely......
就象阳光初照的时候， just like the sun rises in the early morning,
总是回避， i always shy away,
不想拉开百叶窗， unwillingly put up the shutter,
前景总是模糊， future always unseenable,
一定的！ surely,
只要心中永远阳光， if only the hope is always in mind,
向往光明， yearn towards brightness,
向前一步， step forward,
你会发现， then you will find out that,
前方的世界更是精彩， the world in front is such a highlight,
一定的！ surely!
我觉得不能逐字逐句的翻译,很多地方须意译!

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希望明天 Hope in tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is last day i go to the office
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe...

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希望明天 Hope in tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is last day i go to the office
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe......
一切都该结束了， everything should be over,
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的， an essay always need a perfect end,
新的世界还在明天， the new world belongs to tomorrow,
一定的...... definite......
就象阳光初照的时候， just like the sun rises in the early morning,
总是回避， i always shy away,
不想拉开百叶窗， unwillingly undraw the shutter,
前景总是模糊， future always unseenable,
一定的！ definite!!
只要心中永远阳光， as long as there is hope always in mind,
向往光明， yearn towards brightness,
向前一步， step forward,
你会发现， then you will find out that,
前方的世界更是精彩， the world in front is such a highlight,
一定的！ definite!

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Hope tomorrow
Today is the last one day that I went to work,
Probably,
There is a lot of regrets,
Have a lot of missing,
There is a lot of resultses,
Probably......
Everyt...

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Hope tomorrow
Today is the last one day that I went to work,
Probably,
There is a lot of regrets,
Have a lot of missing,
There is a lot of resultses,
Probably......
Everything should end,
An article gross wants the period that draw the top perfection of,
The new world returns tomorrow,
Certain......
Time that elephant sunlight beginning shine on,
Always get around,
Do not want to draw apart the blinds,
The foreground is always misty,
Certain!
As long as the heart inside is forever the sunlight,
Look forward to brilliance,
Forward one-step,
You will discover,
The world of the front is also fascinating,
Certain!

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希望明天 i hope that tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is my last workday,
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe.........

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希望明天 i hope that tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is my last workday,
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe......
一切都该结束了， everything should be over,
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的， an essay always need a perfect end,
新的世界还在明天， the new world belongs to tomorrow,
一定的...... surely......
就象阳光初照的时候， just like the sun rises in the early morning,
总是回避， i always shy away,
不想拉开百叶窗， unwillingly put up the shutter,
前景总是模糊， future always unseenable,
一定的！ surely,
只要心中永远阳光， if only the hope is always in mind,
向往光明， yearn towards brightness,
向前一步， step forward,
你会发现， then you will find out that,
前方的世界更是精彩， the world in front is such a highlight,
一定的！ surely!
我觉得不能逐字逐句的翻译,很多地方须意译!
回答者：008why - 童生 一级 7-19 10:13
希望明天 Hope in tomorrow
今天是我上班的最后一天了， today is last day i go to the office
或许, maybe,
有很多的遗憾， there are many regrets,
有很多的失落， many losses,
有很多的收获， many gains,
或许...... maybe......
一切都该结束了， everything should be over,
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的， an essay always need a perfect end,
新的世界还在明天， the new world belongs to tomorrow,
一定的...... definite......
就象阳光初照的时候， just like the sun rises in the early morning,
总是回避， i always shy away,
不想拉开百叶窗， unwillingly undraw the shutter,
前景总是模糊， future always unseenable,
一定的！ definite!!
只要心中永远阳光， as long as there is hope always in mind,
向往光明， yearn towards brightness,
向前一步， step forward,
你会发现， then you will find out that,
前方的世界更是精彩， the world in front is such a highlight,
一定的！ definite!

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今天是我上班的最后一天了，
today is the last workday
或许,
maybe
有很多的遗憾，
too much regret
有很多的失落，
too much loss
有很多的收获，
too much gain
或许......
maybe
一切都该结束了，
...

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今天是我上班的最后一天了，
today is the last workday
或许,
maybe
有很多的遗憾，
too much regret
有很多的失落，
too much loss
有很多的收获，
too much gain
或许......
maybe
一切都该结束了，
everything comes to the end
一篇文章总要画上完美的句号的，
each article always has a perfect dot.
新的世界还在明天，
new worlds will be in tomorrow
一定的......
it should be
就象阳光初照的时候，
just like the time when new shine is down
总是回避，
always hide
不想拉开百叶窗，
dont want to open the window
前景总是模糊，
everything is dull
一定的！
it shoud be
只要心中永远阳光，
as long as the light in my heart
向往光明，
longing for the light
向前一步，
step forward
你会发现，
you will find that
前方的世界更是精彩，
the world advanced is more wonderful
一定的！
it shoud be

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