我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,I have been play piano for four years.Last year when i heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt ve

我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,I have been play piano for four years.Last year when i heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt ve
我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,
I have been play piano for four years.Last year when i heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.Finally came that day.when we arrived at the concert hall,my hand started shaking expectedly.However,just looking at my teacher's warm face let him get back self-confidence.When it was my turn to perform,I go up the stage and played the piece from beginning to an end pleasantly.Soon,the cheers filled the concert hall.I felt very happy and very proud myself.That is my first piano performance,but I will never forget it for the rest of my life.
一共有十处错误,每句话不超过两处.

我得讲一篇短文改错,但是我的英语水平很烂,改时写清为什么吧,最好详细点,I have been play piano for four years.Last year when i heard the news which there was going to be a piano performance came up in a few weeks,I felt ve
1.I have been playing
have been doing sth 是现在完成进行时
（不是I have been played,这是我被耍了的意思好吗...-_-||）
2.the news that
that 作为连词
3.performance coming up
coming up 是后置定语
4.my hands
改成复数
（这我不太确定有没有那么容易...）
5.let me
句子的主语是我,me
6.I went up
go 的过去式动词 went
7.the end
那首曲子的结尾,应该要是the
8.proud of
固定用语proud + of
9.That was
is 的过去式 was
10.and I will
but 是转折介词,在这里和前后句子的含义有矛盾,因此用and替代.
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I have played piano for four years.
Last year when i heard the news that there was going to be a piano performancep came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.
Finally came that day.
when...

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I have played piano for four years.
Last year when i heard the news that there was going to be a piano performancep came up in a few weeks,I felt very nervous.
Finally came that day.
when we arrived at the concert hall,my hand started shaking.expectedly
However,just looking at my teacher's warm face let me get back self-confidence.
When it was my turn to perform,I went up the stage and played the piece from beginning to an end pleasantly.
Soon,the cheers filled the concert hall.
I felt very happy and very proud of myself.
That is my first piano performance,and I will never forget it for the rest of my life.
只能找出这么多了，按惯例是不是该有个拼写错误？好几年不做了，语法和短语都不太会了

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1. play--played

have  been  done  现在完成时  play为过去分词played

1. which--that

news引导同位语从句 连词应该用that

1. came--coming

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   1. play--played

   have  been  done  现在完成时  play为过去分词played

   1. which--that

   news引导同位语从句 连词应该用that

   1. came--coming

   performance 和come up为主动关系

   1. hand--hands

   两只手  所以复数

   1. him-me

   该短文主语是我

   1. go--went

   该短文为过去时态

   1. proud+of

   be proud of   对……自豪 固定词组

   1. but--and

   连词  翻译就可以

   1. up--to

   这个空不知道对不对

   1.

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