Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money and the most of important is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people are lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .Why why?Make traffic accident reason :

Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money and the most of important is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people are lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .Why why?Make traffic accident reason :
Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money and the most of important is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people are lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .
Why why?
Make traffic accident reason :one .some people break down the traffic rules .they drive their car by their means .this is very wrong .two .some people drive their car as quickly as .so they across the road and street cannot make people fill with danger and make people injure three .some bored driver get drunk still drive their car to street.

Some traffic accident cause damage to some people lose money and the most of important is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people are lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .Why why?Make traffic accident reason :
Some traffic accidents cause damage to some people lose money and the most important thing is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .
Why why?
there are some traffic accidents reason :first,some people break the traffic rules .they drive their car by their means .this is very bad to them .second,some people drive their car as fast as they can.so they across the road or street cannot make people in danger and make people injure last .some bored driver get drink still drive their car on the street.
你的错误还是蛮多的.自己写完后认真检查一下.不要犯基本错误.
你的错误：accident .可数名词.some +可数名词复数、不可数名词单数
make sb do sth.不是 make many people are lost .怎么会用be动词呢.
建议你写建议的时候不要用one two..之类的.我们老师说最好用first,second.之类的.
quickly和faet 的区别.fast:动作本身速度快.quickly：2个动作之间衔接的快.
好了.that is all.

Some traffic accidents cause disaster to some people lose money and the most of important, is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people lost in disturbing
But, why...

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Some traffic accidents cause disaster to some people lose money and the most of important, is losing life .they not only hurt their families .but also make many people lost in disturbing
But, why?
Traffic accident reasons : First .some people break down the traffic rules . they drive their car by their means ,this is a very terrible thing,we should all obey the rules . Second .some people drive their car as quickly as possible.so they even didn;t notice that he or she made people fill with danger and made people injure Third .some bored driver got drunk, but they still drive their car to street. That would hurt a lot of people including themselves.
So please obbey the trafic rules,and take care of every life around you including youselve!
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Traffic accidents cause damages. Some people lose money because of it, but whats worse is that some lose their lives. This will not only hurt their family members, but also makes many people plunge in...

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Traffic accidents cause damages. Some people lose money because of it, but whats worse is that some lose their lives. This will not only hurt their family members, but also makes many people plunge into deep regret. This is a very difficult matter
Why?
The reason traffic accidents occur: 1, some people break traffic rules, they choose do whatever they want. This is very wrong. 2, some people overspeed. This causes an increased risk of injuring pedestrians. 3, drunk driving, drivers who are ignorant to traffic rules and choose to drink before they drive.

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Some traffic accident(s) cause damage to some people (to) lose money and the most (serious) is losing life .they (do) not only hurt their families( ,)but also make many people ( ) lost in disturbing ...

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Some traffic accident(s) cause damage to some people (to) lose money and the most (serious) is losing life .they (do) not only hurt their families( ,)but also make many people ( ) lost in disturbing .this is very difficult .
Why ? why?
(The reasons) of (causing) traffic accident(s) (are) : one ,some people break ( ) the traffic rules . they drive their car (carelessly).this is very (dangerous) . two .some people drive their car as quickly as (they want) .so they (cross) the road and street .(That make) people in danger and injured three .some (tired) driver(s) get drunk,but they still drive their car (on the) street.

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