英文改错 10处 yesterday,my sister Lauar invited his classmates to come to come our house celebrate her birthday.My mother wasbusy bake a cake when she little girls arrived.Laura was exciting about the birthday party and played with them happy.Af

英文改错 10处 yesterday,my sister Lauar invited his classmates to come to come our house celebrate her birthday.My mother wasbusy bake a cake when she little girls arrived.Laura was exciting about the birthday party and played with them happy.Af
英文改错 10处
yesterday,my sister Lauar invited his classmates to come to come our house celebrate her birthday.My mother wasbusy bake a cake when she little girls arrived.Laura was exciting about the birthday party and played with them happy.After 35 minutes my mother said,"Laura,would you have alook on the cake?Just put a knife in it,and because it comes out clean,the cake is ready."After ten minute Luara came back."What took you so long?"my mother asks."I put the knife in the cake and it came out so much clean that i put all the other dirty knives in it,"said Laura.

英文改错 10处 yesterday,my sister Lauar invited his classmates to come to come our house celebrate her birthday.My mother wasbusy bake a cake when she little girls arrived.Laura was exciting about the birthday party and played with them happy.Af
错误不止有10处,括号里是纠正过的：
yesterday(->Yesterday),my sister Lauar (->Laura) invited his(->her) classmates to come to come(->删除该字) our house (->to) celebrate her birthday.My mother wasbusy(->was busy) bake (->baking) a cake when she (->the/her) little girls arrived.Laura was exciting (->excited) about the birthday party and played with them happy (->happily).After 35 minutes my mother said,"Laura,would you have alook (->a look) on the cake?Just put a knife in it,and because (->when) it comes out clean,the cake is ready." After ten minute (->minutes) Luara (->Laura) came back."What took you so long?"my (->My) mother asks (->asked)."I put the knife in the cake and it came out so much clean that i (->I) put all the other dirty knives in it," said Laura.
笑点：小妹劳拉把脏的餐刀放进生日蛋糕里进行清洁,哈哈!

yesterday,my sister Lauar invited (her) classmates to come our house (to)celebrate her birthday. My mother was busy (baking ) a cake when (the)little girls arrived. Laura was (excited)about the birthd...

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yesterday,my sister Lauar invited (her) classmates to come our house (to)celebrate her birthday. My mother was busy (baking ) a cake when (the)little girls arrived. Laura was (excited)about the birthday party and played with them (happily).After 35 minutes my mother said,"Laura,would you have a look on the cake?Just put a knife in it,and (when) it comes out clean,the cake is ready."After ten (minutes) Luara came back."(Why) took you so long?"my mother (asked)."I put the knife in the cake and it came out so (much 去掉)clean that i put all the other dirty knives in it,"said Laura.

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1.come 删了
2.celebrate 前加to
3. be busy doing，所以是baking
4.she 改成her
5.be excited, 因为前面是人
6..happy 改成 happily ，因为修饰，所以用副词
7.ten minutes
8.asks 改成 asked因为全是过去的事要一致
9.假设所以because改为if
10.much 删了

第一行 to come to come 后面的come删掉，多余的。
house 后面加to

第二行 bake改为baking
she改为the
exciting改为excited

第三行 happy改为happily
minute 倒数第二行，改为复数minutes

第四行 because改为if

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第一行 to come to come 后面的come删掉，多余的。
house 后面加to

第二行 bake改为baking
she改为the
exciting改为excited

第三行 happy改为happily
minute 倒数第二行，改为复数minutes

第四行 because改为if
第五行 asks改为asked
第六行 much删除



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第一行：his改为her
第二行：house 后加to
第三行：bake 改为baking girls 改为girl
第四行：exciting 改为excited