英语翻译在修摩托车店的场景：我去取昨天送来的摩托,是不是需要花钱?能替我把它开火试一圈么?不要在线翻译出来的,要口语化

英语翻译在修摩托车店的场景：我去取昨天送来的摩托,是不是需要花钱?能替我把它开火试一圈么?不要在线翻译出来的,要口语化
英语翻译
在修摩托车店的场景：
我去取昨天送来的摩托,是不是需要花钱?能替我把它开火试一圈么?
不要在线翻译出来的,要口语化

英语翻译在修摩托车店的场景：我去取昨天送来的摩托,是不是需要花钱?能替我把它开火试一圈么?不要在线翻译出来的,要口语化
I am here to pick up the motorcycle.It was sent here yesterday.Do I have to pay for anything?I cannot ride a motrcycle.( I don't know how to ride a motorcycle.) Can you test drive around for me?

I will go for the motorcycle sent yesterday,do I need to pay? I don't know how ot ride,can you pls help to try it?

i fetch my babe motor yesterday send. have i pay for it? i can't play,would u please drive around for me?

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I am gonna pick that motorcycle sent here yesterday.Do i need to pay? I have no idea how to drive. Could you turn it on and drive a round for me ?

我去取昨天送来的摩托，是不是需要花钱？
I am going for take back motor which send by yesterday, if need to pay?
我不会骑，能替我把它开火试一圈么？
I don't know drive, can you help me for firing?

比较美式的地道口语化说法：
Do I have to pay if i'm gonna go pick up the motorbike they brought here yesterday? I don't know how to handle it though. Can you help me test it just a little bit? Maybe one or two ...

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比较美式的地道口语化说法：
Do I have to pay if i'm gonna go pick up the motorbike they brought here yesterday? I don't know how to handle it though. Can you help me test it just a little bit? Maybe one or two laps?
几点翻译中需注意的：
“取”在这里一定要用“Pick up”，这是最常用的固定搭配。
美国人说话似乎更喜欢把“if”放在句子后面以保持连贯性。
send是“送走”的意思；bring（正确的时态为brought）才是“送来”
在这里“骑”最好用万能词“handle”（Drive肯定不行），符合一般美国人的口语习惯。
在机动车领域，一圈两圈的“圈”只能说成“lap”。
我是在美国读书的，还算知道一些常用表达。

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I am here to pick up my motorcycle that I brought here yesterday. Is there any cost associated with it? I don't know how to ride, can you test ride the bike for me?

楼上的的确非常口语化．不过建议你在美国还是要学一些好点的英语．gonna 听起来真的很烂．不好意思，我不是说你，只是觉得美式英语实在没有什么水平，一般poorly-educated 人才会这么用．不过用在口语里可以接受．若有冒犯，请原谅．