帮我看看这英语演讲稿有什么错误As is known to all.On May 12th .A big earthquake happen in Wenchuan.We can catch sight of many people lost their home on TV.A number of people live in dark and cold place several hours .But they didn't giv

帮我看看这英语演讲稿有什么错误As is known to all.On May 12th .A big earthquake happen in Wenchuan.We can catch sight of many people lost their home on TV.A number of people live in dark and cold place several hours .But they didn't giv
帮我看看这英语演讲稿有什么错误
As is known to all.On May 12th .A big earthquake happen in Wenchuan.We can catch sight of many people lost their home on TV.A number of people live in dark and cold place several hours .But they didn't give up .they believe they can live .
When an earthquake happen .how can we do If we are inside .we should hide under the table until the shaking stop .
If you are outside ,you must away from high building and run up to empty place .
Keeping calm play an important part in earthquake .
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帮我看看这英语演讲稿有什么错误As is known to all.On May 12th .A big earthquake happen in Wenchuan.We can catch sight of many people lost their home on TV.A number of people live in dark and cold place several hours .But they didn't giv
hello everyone it is my great honour to be here to give you a speech.
结束语：OK thank you ,this is all my speech ,thank you for listening
A number of people live in dark and cold place FOR several hours
WHAT can we do
If you are outside ,you must RUAN / BE away from high building and run up to empty place
Keeping calm PLAYS an important part in AN earthquake .
错的地方我用了打些字母,

Keeping calm play an important part in earthquake .【保持冷静中发挥重要的地震。】这句怪怪的，换成 When an earthquake occurs, keep calm plays an important role in【当地震发生时，保持冷静发挥着重要的作用】会更好吧！

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On May 12th . A big earthquake happen in Wenchuan.一般情况下时间状语放后，你是想强调时间吗？

既然是演讲，首先给你加个开场白
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, it is my great honor to be here to have a talk about first-aid tips.
再接上你的演讲稿就很不错，最后以That's all, thanks for your listening!结尾即可。
错误有：“...

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既然是演讲，首先给你加个开场白
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, it is my great honor to be here to have a talk about first-aid tips.
再接上你的演讲稿就很不错，最后以That's all, thanks for your listening!结尾即可。
错误有：“When an earthquake happen，how can we do ?”改为 ：“When an earthquake happens，what can we do?”
整体很不错！希望我的回答能对你有用

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